I loved this story, minus the child neglectance. I can't believe that Minato had more then once forgotten about his daughter Mina, it was the main reason why Mina was then adopted by Naruto. Though I found it rather funny that Naruto would fuck his own twin brother. Well technically since he was adopted as a Sarutobi, he wasn't technically family related. However he was blood related. I don't mind incest but that doesn't mean that I would write it. Anyways keep up the good work. I hope there are more stories like this one in your works. xD I loved it.
Damn that was a great story!
Wow!
I read this one three months and it's uncomplete then...But still good to read.
I like Dom Naruto and there's not many stories about that.
I was waiting for an good epilog and yes! It is an very good one.
And for other stories I still want to read more of "Hey There Witchdoctor"
I wish you to have many more excellent ideas and writer blocks to not happen
Ganbatte!Neko-chan👋👋👋
I really liked the ending!!!! thank you for sharing this great story with us!!!
Awesome story. My friend thought I was going insane due to my reactions. Very well written. Please continue!! Not many stories are this well thought out and able to grab attention and emotion.
Finally a new chapter!!! That was amazing!!! I really liked the show naruto made^^ And the scene with the bloody handprind and minato rializing who naruto is was just great!!!! And the wipping Arashi got was fantastic too!!!! Can't wait for the next update and of cause I'm still eagerly waiting on an update to withdoctor wich is still my favorite!!! See you again soon!!!!
hello love (it's me Broedandbroken anonymous no more for i once again have access to my account). anyway my love that was a clif not an end. not nice. i hope he didn't get realy mentally damage. please don't leave it like this!
That was a great chapter!!! Hope Arashi finally sees his errors!!!! See you again soon!!!!
My heart is beating so fast for Natsu right now! How stupid can Minato get??
Another amazing story, I'm particularly eagerly awaiting the next chapter for this story! :D
do you plan on have natsu get pregnant by his brother naruto