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for A Crafty Chameleon

by Blackkitten23

person smint45
schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chappy I liked how Naruto did all the fighting and how natsu flipped at I arid comment!!! They are quite stupid not realizing Narutos bloodlinelimit ^^ see you again soon !!!!
person vidalhbea
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Where do you come up with this stuff? I love it! This is writing at its best. My fav part being Zabuza comparing Naruto to a horse. Lol. More please!
person rose
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update soon please thank you
person moodysavage
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I sooo did not pick up on who Natsu and Sasuke were arguing about... Naruto under different names people have given him! I liked that.
person rose
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
person smint45
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice^^ To bad we didn't see narutos bloodlinelimits in the fight^^ Cab't wait^^ See you again soon!!!
person rose
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update soon please thank you
person vidalhbea
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More please!
person vidalhbea
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help but notice how cool these stories are. I'm sure he was showing off when he grabbed the bells. Nice of him to give them to his teammates...even if some of them didn't deserved his kindness.
person moodysavage
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Naruto has his brother and younger sister that can get to know him... and the rest do deserve to be punished. The sex scene at the end though just seemed to come out of nowhere... your story will still have followers without a sex scene in every chapter... it's ok to make us wait :)