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for Moving Forward Fangs First

by Blackkitten23

person lara5170
schedule September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for a great story. I really enjoy stories that show Naruto as powerful, intelligent and attractive.

person rose
schedule December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please update soon thank you
person smint45
schedule December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing!!! Great chapter!!! Hope Itachi and Genma will be alright^^ See you soon!!!
person smint45
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So finally minato and kushina see reason^^ I'm glad!!! Can't wait for more!!!
person Antoinette
schedule October 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and how it's playing out. Can't wait to read more.
person smint45
schedule October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really nice chapter!! I really liked Sasuke fainting^^ That was fun!!!! Thanks a lot for the update!!!!
person rose
schedule October 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please update soon please thank you
person smint45
schedule August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great so they finally know^^ Thanks a lot for the update see you again soon!!!!
person rose
schedule August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please update soon thank you
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OKAY. Story is interesting, but I'm having a grammar nazi moment here. When a person begins to speak, it is like the start of a new sentence, even if it's in the middle of one. This means CAPITAL LETTERS for the start of the first word. Auto Correct doesn't always pick that up so YOU, the author, need to watch for it. Please do. The lack is distracting from what would otherwise be a fun read.