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for Moving Forward Fangs First

by Blackkitten23

person Anon
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Second Grammar Nazi moment. Spell check. Use it please. If yours isn't working for whatever reason, please find someone to read over your work. Thank You.
person smint45
schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! Can't wait for the fight to come in the next chapter^^ Wonder if the others will finally realize what he is!!!! See you again soon!!
person rose
schedule July 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update soon please thank you
person rose
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update soon please thank you
person smint45
schedule July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy narutos mates are pregnant^^ Can't wait to see the babys^^ See you again soon!!!
person vidalhbea
schedule July 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Narutos gonna be a father! Ya!! Cool promotion. He'll do a good job. Ah that Teuchi. He never gives up! Wow Minato and Kushina know how to ruin a party. And the cliffhanger. I love it! Job well done!
person smint45
schedule June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was great^^ The smutt with han was so hot!!!!
person vidalhbea
schedule June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You done good here. Please continue.
person moodysavage
schedule June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger... meanie
person vidalhbea
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, looks like everyone wants our favorite blonde. Can't say that I blame them. You wrote one sexy scene. Yummy! The cliffhanger wasn't to bad either.