rate_review Reviews

I loved this fic and there are sadly not enough fics like this where Sasuke ends up winning in the end. I really hope you will consider writing a multi chapter fic like Naruto Shippuden: Naruto's Hypnotic Slave Girls only with Sasuke as the main character. You can even go so far as to do something like Sasuke using the Edo Tensai to bring back decesed female characters to enslave. I read a fic where Sasuke used the Shisui ultimate Genjutsu to make females his slaves but sadly that seems to have been abandoned long ago and I would love to see another similar to it. Hope you will consider my fic request, keep up the awesome work and I look forward to your next Naruto fic.

First, don't split up the paragraphs so much. For example, no description of someone's looks and/or outfit should be split into more than one paragraph. Otherwise, not bad.

Do not mine WTF, LiquidPhazon he just doesn't like the main character of your stories. I too wouldn't mind Naruto being the to do stuff such as this I like Sasuke doing it just as much. Nicely done on making all of it fit into a coherent one-shot, with that many girls being written in that must have been difficult to keep track of them all. I look forward to seeing more from you as it seems the quality of your work goes up with each story you make.

Plz write more and breed naruko

okay I don't get what the deal is with trying to make Sasgay get all the women, look you need to face the facts that the show is called Naruto not Sasgay so Naruto should be getting all the action because not only is he the main character for the show but his name IS THE SHOW NARUTO!! make it so there's atleast another of these fanfics but make it so Naruto gets this And make Sasgay a female it's what he's supposed to be anyways