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for Once in a Blue Moon

by Sasunarufan13

schedule September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just court up with the last 3 chapter... now I wonder who knocking on Sasuke's door lol jk I know who it is. Great work and I hope to see the next chapter soon.
person Sasame
schedule September 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kami-sama... This was my first reaction, today, when seeing(after running couple of ours around two sick people and house duties), that there is NEW chap. *=*
I wasn't writing comments, 'coz I was thinking it is long-left-behind fic, so you will NOT read it, anyway... I read "The grass is green on the other side" and was really taken by this Alfa-Beta-Omega world... Also was a little jealous of those, who could give you ideas of scenes to "Once in the Blue Moon" serie.
My ideas... I'll love to read about Naruto meating Sasukes and Itachis parents, Sasuke being "made" to deliver his and Narutos baby - maybe he can't trust nobody with something THIS precious? Also whet nagging me, is a scene when Naruto was suposed to take Gaara(but they fall apart) to trip with his friend in July(I would love to write about Sasukes and Narutos friends first meeting)... I'm at chapter 4th at now, so I'll go with it, than maybe, knowing you ARE READING it, I'll comment(if my scedule let me) all chapters seperately.
I have a hope, too, read (of course it is your choice if YOU let me - in that case your a GOD(like creature;p) - first Christmas for Naruto and Sasuke and their infant at Deidaras... Or maybe Sasukes this time? But I like Dei and Tachi(Akihito and Shion too) be there.
I'm shutting, for now. Thank you for great story. ;)
person Sasame
schedule September 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
PS. When reading chapter 5th, I thought... Maybe you should call Narutos and Sasukes baby "Tsuki", like a moon? It will be nice reference to title of this serie... I wish you good fortune with this fic... and will pray for you to not get this idea of leaving this so-nice-story unfinished. ;)
person smint45
schedule September 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!!! The kiss was sooo hot!!! And i liked the brotherly talk Itachi had with Sasuke^^ See you again next week!!!
person Lil-lo
schedule September 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You didn't disappoint with the whole Gaara intro! I loved the mutual tension the two felt for each other and how verbally they barely held back. I have to admit, Gaara really won that one with the "we're working on it " comeback...talk about shots fired!

Naruto and Sasuke's office visit was also really well written. I felt so bad for how heartbroken Naruto got. On top of that Sasuke felt so bad right along side him. I even have to give Sasuke credit for loving Naruto so much already that he's trying to be helpful to someone who has what Sasuke wants for Naruto's sake. I'm glad this story gives us a changed point of view because Sasuke internally is going to go off so bad when he gets to speak with Gaara's formal doctor...you can tell Naruto basically is at the end of his rope on this baby and to know the additional facts after witnessing that type of heartbreak is going to be HUGE!!!

Thank you for the update!!!
person smint45
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!!! I liked the meeting of sasuke and gaara!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm very excited and impatient. More soon I hope.
person Lil-lo
schedule September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I feel a bit mean for laughing at Sasuke over that baby powder...but not too much as it gave him a chance to see Naruto again. I'm glad he's cooperating with the nice, sensible attempted blond shagging Alpha instincts.

He is really gonna get angry on the inside meeting Gaara next chapter...and I almost forgot but this chapter made me want Itachi to get his revenge when Sasuke's fretting over the arrival of his own baby XD
person smint45
schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was again great!!!! I really like thta Sasuke is flling this fast for naruto!!!! Thanks a lot for the update so can't wait for th meeting with gaara in the next chapter and Sasukes thoughts on him!!!! See you again soon!!!
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I can't wait for them to be together.