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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is super fun! I love that it's literally the girls grabbing Naruto and Hinata, not the other way around. As for a suggested next, Ino or Tenten!
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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It kinda gets repetitive with only Naruto and a bunch of girls.
Would be curious to see some swinging to even the balance. Thought this story might go that way in the beginning with Kurenai there, or even with the Inuzuka. So maybe some partner swapping with Kurenai/Naruto Asuna/Hinata? Doesn't have to be them, but something to that affect.
I'm just not a fan in general of Naruto being able to shag other women whenever he likes while his partner is only ever seemingly doing so with other women.
Would be curious to see some swinging to even the balance. Thought this story might go that way in the beginning with Kurenai there, or even with the Inuzuka. So maybe some partner swapping with Kurenai/Naruto Asuna/Hinata? Doesn't have to be them, but something to that affect.
I'm just not a fan in general of Naruto being able to shag other women whenever he likes while his partner is only ever seemingly doing so with other women.
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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i have to say for the 4 chapters its pretty good. looking forward to see who the next girl will be. I might have a idea for a request.