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for Hey There Witchdoctor!

by Blackkitten23

schedule June 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

1st I just want to say I love this story and have read it from start to finish many times but I feel the need to point out that during this paragraph “I know I shouldn’t have transformed without fire Mom,, but in my defense it was-… I know … I know … I can’t make a contract unless I’m allowed to stay. The Akatsuki might not let-… actually it’s 4:00 in the morning here. There’s a few hours time difference remember… no I’m not becoming a night owl, you called-… I have to call you back Mom … yes I love you too … bye Mom” Iruka immediately dove under the water and frantically searched for anything to help him escape “you don’t need to hide professor Iruka” since Naruto is British in this story he most likly would have pronuced it mum not mom due to that is how brits usually say it!

schedule March 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome story though I totally think they should have messed with the hunters more at the end that would have been funny as hell!

person smint45
schedule March 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic end for a fantastic story!!! Sad to see this one go I really loved it!!!!

person smint45
schedule March 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh family visit in the next one!!! Can't wait!!! Great chapter!!!! Too bad the story is probably nearing its end!!!

person smint45
schedule February 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

great chapter!!! The smutt was amazing!!!! Thanks for the post can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

person smint45
schedule January 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Amazing chapter!!!! I really love this story!!! Hope Naruto will be able to help kiba with his sense of smell^^ Altough he is a brat^^ See you soon!!!

person smint45
schedule November 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing chapter I‘m so glad that Naruto is alright!!!!! See you again soon!!!!

person smint45
schedule September 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god you can't kill Naruto off!!!! I'm really begging you to update soon so we know Naruto will be ok!!!! Please!!!! See you soon!!!!

person smint45
schedule August 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god!!!! A double update and a nasty chliffy!!!! Now Naruto really needs to get the werewolfs on his side!!! We don't want him to die!!!! I really adore this story and the last two chapters were amazing!!! We learned a lot about his hellhound self and the contract!!! Amazing story can't wait for the next part!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!!

schedule June 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OMG I can totally see some of them shitting themselves!

He has a good point why are non-humans limiting themselves to human ingredients?

I wonder when the others will arrive and what their reactions will be to Naruto's Hell Hound form ;)

Keep up the good work!!