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please add more. i cant wait.... the suspense is killing me.

this is definetly my kind of story with all the different types of supernatural and all. thank you

Okay first, the story introduces all these characters without explaination of what or who they are, second, this drives me crazy bur when making dialog, add the periods/comma will you? To be honest, this story wasnt well thought out and changes the whole prospective of the Naruto Ninja world. "Oh, we have britians and americans in our clan!" If your gonna change the way Naruto and his world is, call it a AU or say non-cannon meaning it's different from the original. AND LAST, STOP LYING IN THE DESCRIPTION/MAKING SO MANY CHAPTERS AVOIDING THE MAIN PLOT. I'm not being harsh, but if I sound harsh I'm sorry. The way to learn is to have some harsh things said.

That was great!!! I so can't wait for the frightend merman part!!! Please update really soon!!!

This story just gets better and better^^ So can't wait for more!!! Thank you so much for the update and see you again soon!!!

Fantastic chappy!!!! Thanks so much for the update!!!! See you soon!!!!

Oh my god this story is so amazing!!! I really adore this so much!!!! I think this is fast becoming my favorite followed right after bat anbu!!!! Thank you so much for the update and hope to see you again soon!!!!

That was really really amazing!! I love the idea with the virus!!! And the tea just amazing!!!! Thanks a lot for the fast update and hope to hear from you again soon!!!!

faszinating new story!!! Really got me hooked on this one!!! Hope you will update really soon!!!

Ive read almost all of your stories and i have to say so far your writing is really interesting. Im always checking to see if you have updated. So its safe to say you are one of my favorite writers. -hides out of embarrassment-