I love these stories. You do a great job filling in the blanks of " I wonder what this was like". There is one situation I'd love for you to write. I'd like to know how Itachi, and Deidara's first time went down. Not because it's a "sexy scene" but because I love reading about the time when Itachi was trying to win him over. I would love to see when Deidara stops playing "hard to get" and is completely won over by Itachi. I'd also love to see how Itachi would respond to this. I just think it'd be a good chapter. Thank you for writing!
That was great!!!! I liked this chappy a lot!!!! And I love how Itachi confessed^^ I really like how he put his feelings out there^^ emotionally stunted my ass^^ That was fantastic!!!! Thanks for the great chapter!!!! See you again soon!!!!
Oh that was so sweet!!! I really like Jiraya!!! And his aproval in the end was sooooo sweet!!!! Thank you so much for this sweet chapter and see you again soon!!!
Nice chappy!!! I liked it!!! I would love to see the fox painting^^ To bad i can't draw at all^^ See you again soon!!!
Although I've read the first two parts of this story, this is my first time reviewing. I love how it has played out so far, and I'm happy to see that Gaara has moved on and is happy again. Good job with the meeting between him and Naruto; it could have been much more awkward, especially when Naruto and Utakata met. Thanks for another great chapter.
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I really liked this chapter!!! I'm glad gaara found somebody too!!!! Thanks a lot for the update and see you again soon!!!!
I was suprised to see "Gaara" centric chapter here, but I thought it was well done. I am glad to see him moving on and having matured. While I never thought of him as a villian or evil in the other stories ... I did find him to be extremely selfish. I am glad you were able to give him a happy ending.
That was really amazing!!! I really liked the smutt!!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!!
Sorry I haven't been reviewing but work has beein killing me :( All those chapters I missed were amazing!!! Naruto giving birth to the twis had me really holding my breath. Can't he have a normal delivery once :) I'm kind of glad I only read those chapters now because I just know that the cliffy between part one and two would have killed me^^ And the bitch in the last chapter :) It was so much fun to watch Itachi tear into her^^ Thank you for sharing and see you again soon!!!!