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November 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally it's here ! I loved the story . It was sweet , but not too sweet . Can't wait for the next chapter as you just got me hooked .
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November 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I gave my eyes little break after commenting Halloween oneshot, now I can comment one of my fav series. ;)
I wasn't on time for "Sakura"(Cherry Tree) 1-shot, coz I wasn't checking lately, for my own stability - If you check everyday and there is nothing, EVEN IF YOU KNOW, there will probably not be, coz live is brutal(translate: everyone have their duties to do, life to live - I writed myself years ago, and in couples of years, "true life" won ;/ ), you(that means me;p) got annoyed, and to prevent it, I stopped... and looked today.
And, to top it all, my wish(one of many) is fullfiled. Domo Arigato, I'm reading and pointing(as in my country is past midnight and it will be easier to just "pointing"). x)
1. Itachi is making fun of Sasuke and I'm sure, that when Dei was expecting, he was on his toes, to NOT sleep on the couch.
2. Sasuke will probably blackmail Kakashi with his "inspiration-collection" to his death. Always using this lower-than-belt hit... But if it is giving him, what he want... Well. Kakashis fault for having so obvious weakness. ;)
3. However, it will be nice to see, even if only some flash, from first visit, Kakashi meeting Naruto and all. And Sasuke ready to jump his bones, and NOT in the plesant way. ;)
4. I have problem with imagining "Obitos (who I automaticly typify with Tobi)" adulthood. Even after War, when hear "Obito", I'm seeing Tobi-is-a-good-boy, running away from "Deidara-sempai", when he is trying to blow him up. xD
5. Even if I was asking for it, I couldn't NOT to think, that baby is second "mummy" - always doing what want and choose bad time by instinct. ;)
There is something I'm not really catching with - " "Don't remind me," Sasuke groused and glowered at his own glass of wine. Obito's home was located at the outskirts of the town, close to the mountains, and it was a two and a half hour drive to get to the centre of the city." = " "Three and a half hours," he replied and clenched his teeth together. It sounded much longer when he said it out loud."
Am I thinking properly, that added hour is time to come to Kakashis?
6. " "You want to do something? Go grab our coats," Naruto demanded with a sigh. "No offence, but I don't want to be around your family now."" - See of overprotective Alphas... I'm not surprised, that Naruto wanna run. ^u^
7. " "And try to be as relaxed as possible," Sasuke continued, taking a turn to the left, passing an elderly man with his dog." - WHY people don't understand, that telling them to RELAX, you just make them pissed, ergo, LESS RELAXED. ;)
8. Naruto is SO LUCKY to get doctor(non less - best one) as a hubby. If not, he will be REALLY in trouble to get labored, in the middle of nowhere... o/O
9. Helpless Sasuke always will be adorable to "see". ;)
10. " "Fu-fuck, never again!" " - It is classic... but still most not kept promise for 95% of woman. xD
11. " Tanned fingers caressed red, wrinkly, soft skin and blue eyes admired the small tuft of black blue hair that peeked out from underneath the jacket. Their son had dark blue eyes that would most likely turn into the shade of blue his daddy had." - He will probably end with wolfish smile of his "mummy", maybe all personality? Being Narutos baby "you" don't have many ocasions to become glummy(like daddy ;D), with "mom" that can overshadow sun with shining personality.
12. " "I have a son, Naruto. He's really here now."" - Somehow, subconsiously, I corrected Sasuke(in Narutos name) "No, Baka. WE have a son, not "you"" ;)
13. It somehow come, there is (lucky?) 13 points. All scene come out truly adorable. Now you have me waiting for next. ;)
Good luck with having Time God on your side. ;)
I wasn't on time for "Sakura"(Cherry Tree) 1-shot, coz I wasn't checking lately, for my own stability - If you check everyday and there is nothing, EVEN IF YOU KNOW, there will probably not be, coz live is brutal(translate: everyone have their duties to do, life to live - I writed myself years ago, and in couples of years, "true life" won ;/ ), you(that means me;p) got annoyed, and to prevent it, I stopped... and looked today.
And, to top it all, my wish(one of many) is fullfiled. Domo Arigato, I'm reading and pointing(as in my country is past midnight and it will be easier to just "pointing"). x)
1. Itachi is making fun of Sasuke and I'm sure, that when Dei was expecting, he was on his toes, to NOT sleep on the couch.
2. Sasuke will probably blackmail Kakashi with his "inspiration-collection" to his death. Always using this lower-than-belt hit... But if it is giving him, what he want... Well. Kakashis fault for having so obvious weakness. ;)
3. However, it will be nice to see, even if only some flash, from first visit, Kakashi meeting Naruto and all. And Sasuke ready to jump his bones, and NOT in the plesant way. ;)
4. I have problem with imagining "Obitos (who I automaticly typify with Tobi)" adulthood. Even after War, when hear "Obito", I'm seeing Tobi-is-a-good-boy, running away from "Deidara-sempai", when he is trying to blow him up. xD
5. Even if I was asking for it, I couldn't NOT to think, that baby is second "mummy" - always doing what want and choose bad time by instinct. ;)
There is something I'm not really catching with - " "Don't remind me," Sasuke groused and glowered at his own glass of wine. Obito's home was located at the outskirts of the town, close to the mountains, and it was a two and a half hour drive to get to the centre of the city." = " "Three and a half hours," he replied and clenched his teeth together. It sounded much longer when he said it out loud."
Am I thinking properly, that added hour is time to come to Kakashis?
6. " "You want to do something? Go grab our coats," Naruto demanded with a sigh. "No offence, but I don't want to be around your family now."" - See of overprotective Alphas... I'm not surprised, that Naruto wanna run. ^u^
7. " "And try to be as relaxed as possible," Sasuke continued, taking a turn to the left, passing an elderly man with his dog." - WHY people don't understand, that telling them to RELAX, you just make them pissed, ergo, LESS RELAXED. ;)
8. Naruto is SO LUCKY to get doctor(non less - best one) as a hubby. If not, he will be REALLY in trouble to get labored, in the middle of nowhere... o/O
9. Helpless Sasuke always will be adorable to "see". ;)
10. " "Fu-fuck, never again!" " - It is classic... but still most not kept promise for 95% of woman. xD
11. " Tanned fingers caressed red, wrinkly, soft skin and blue eyes admired the small tuft of black blue hair that peeked out from underneath the jacket. Their son had dark blue eyes that would most likely turn into the shade of blue his daddy had." - He will probably end with wolfish smile of his "mummy", maybe all personality? Being Narutos baby "you" don't have many ocasions to become glummy(like daddy ;D), with "mom" that can overshadow sun with shining personality.
12. " "I have a son, Naruto. He's really here now."" - Somehow, subconsiously, I corrected Sasuke(in Narutos name) "No, Baka. WE have a son, not "you"" ;)
13. It somehow come, there is (lucky?) 13 points. All scene come out truly adorable. Now you have me waiting for next. ;)
Good luck with having Time God on your side. ;)