Right. As of right now, in 2025, people don't populate this site anymore. Probably because this site had a security episode. Many authors have never returned.
A shame though.
In this case, Sai is like: "Dickless has performed the mission to satisfaction quite quickly. As expected of the Seventh."
You fucking tease.
I loved it. Such a shame she's dead. Need to find a way to revive her to... damn it...
I want to bawl my eyes out.
Of course Sai knew all the way back then. He was just playing his part.
Here I am wondering when the real breeding takes place. Because obviously we've jumped to Boruto that time and never once see mention of Naruto's kids. Or the other kids...
Yeah. Dick-tator. He who dictates who gets to have the Dick. Come now. His amassed power only serves Konoha. And in turn the prosperity of the Land of Fire.
It's hilarious.
And here we are. The last chapter. 2018.
Did you die of Covid during the lockdowns? Or before 2019? Sigh. Or did you just leave this site when the security shit happened?
In chapter 13 Naruto mentioned being defeated in sex by 1 or 2 women. Like a sexfight? Would you be willing to do chapters about those inconters and his referenced rematchs? And maybe some similar stuff with tsunade and potentially mei and or konan, and or kaguya . I would guess he lost to the 2 female jinchurichi initially?
CH.01 - Anko 1
Powerful beginning for a story supposed smut-driven. You got me excited now.
Woah what an amazing first chapter! Definitely super hot.
The way you described everything is super sexy, not to mention organic and dynamic.
I did not expect for 4 girls to appear in what's essentialy a pilot, but I'm more surprised at the qualty of the content. You got some skills friend.
I have high expectations for the rest of this story.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: please post this and your other stories on AO3. The feedback is much better there, both in quality and amount. The review system is better there too, being similar to the Reddit threads.
CH.02 - Sakura 1
Outright starting with Sakura's denial is a masterful play right here.
The whoke smut scene is really developed. It's emotionally charged too, not too much that it's a turn off, but rather more than enough to give that just bit of extra to the lemon.
The descriptions involved and the "trip" she went through are amaing too.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: please post this and your other stories on AO3. The feedback is much better there, both in quality and amount. The review system is better there too, being similar to the Reddit threads.
CH.03 - Ino 1
Hinata's POV at the beginnign here was really fun to see. It's nice to have different outlooks from distinct characters to enrich the story. Her ponderings on Sakura and Naru's relationship are also quite deep, unexpectedly so to be frank. I think you should do more of it, as it is quite good.
Outstanding smut at the middle. Super hot.
Ino's slowly going down a depraved spiral, let's see how long she lasts.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: please post this and your other stories on AO3. The feedback is much better there, both in quality and amount. The review system is better there too, being similar to the Reddit threads.