I've been enjoying the story quite a bit, and I hope you continue.
Any chance of a Tsunade 3 chapter? Because a) Naruto being 13 when she starts in on him is creepy (although I get that Konoha would probably have a much lower age of consent, and Naruto is hardly a child by this point in the story) and b) I'd like to get to the part where Tsunade gets preggers.
Which I hope happens when Naruto is substantially older than 13.
That said, Tsunade is more than old enough to be menopausal. Are we operating under the assumption that kunoichi have longer reproductive periods than normal women, or is she just somehow staving it off with her medical knowledge?
I only created this account to review this fic. I wanted to review this because it is one of if not the best lemon stories I've ever read and I'm really hoping you dont abandon it just because you dont get many reviews.
I'm honestly surprised those two old farts are still alive. And Naruto has the backing of two clans heads, so yeah, he is pretty powerful politically.
I hope Kiba finds a girl who makes him happy... and isn't interested in Naruto.
And to be fair to Kiba, the Fourth Shinobi War could have concluded with everyone being turned into eternal slumber batteries for Kaguya, so it was short but terrifying.
Well first, good chapter.
Second, I hope you follow the story, even if you start another one. I mean, what I want to say is that if you want to continue this story in the future you can do it, because it's great.
As for the comments or replies left, I think it is due to several factors. That they go from that this site little by little loses relevance, happening because the sleeve Naruto already finished. Until it ends it is not a well-known place.
I do not know if you know the fic Eroninja of TheLemonSage, it's one of the best stories, with many chapters, excellent plot and a harem to die for. However, it has few comments and replies and is not very well known.
I would recommend AO3 on all other places. Because with the tags that you can give to this story, it would be impossible not to see it, hahaha.
And to finish, what is preferable ?.
A dictura that deals with the people and their basic needs, promoting work, health and education in addition to free expression or a democratic government sells homeland that only serves the interest of a few and enjoys the suffering of others, censures dissident voices and makes political, judicial and mediatic persecution to anyone who is an opponent.
I'm telling you because I'm from Argentina, and that's exactly what's happening.
Do not be discouraged and keep going.
Luck
very nice build up/aftermath. to me the build up and aftermath is more important than the actual porn. and the lack of it is the biggest criticism i can give you as a writer.
as to "starting a new fic" i am SO down for that :D
maybe one where my girl sakura gets a happier ending than "chooses the wrong guy, then gets relegated to unloved-cumdump"
Honestly, I think this site is dying. Like, this is a site from the early-mid naughties, and it still looks the part. It lacks a lot of the functionality that one would expect from a site like this, and if you look at the younger fandoms, like RWBY, My Hero Academia, Zootopia, ETC... there are little-to-no stories for any of them on this site. Most of them are using Hentai-Foundry, Archive of our Own, or other, more modern sites for their stories. Maybe it's time to look into moving on to greener pastures.
Still love this story, by the way, one of my absolute favorites on this entire site, and whatever you do, I can't wait to see what comes next.
Hey, I love this story, and yes, there's a draught of quality het stories on this site and in general.
So when I read that it's demotivating that no-one reviews, I made an account specifically to tell you i like your story.
keep up the good work!
As I mentioned in my other revuew on another site I love this chapter and the direction you are going with this story. Honestly I think it really shows how much you matured as a writer since the beginning.
And you are right about this site dying, the UI is horribly outdated and makes it very hard for new fandoms to thrive. The absence of a search bar itself is an outrage.
I would strongly advise you to migrate to HentaiFoundry(dot)com as soon as possible. Your Naruto centered story would he very welcome there and the community is a lot more active there.
Regarding this fic in particular. Honestly? I think it is getting to them time for you to finish up. Narratively, it wouldn't make sense for Naruto to reakise he is begin to resemble a dictator, but keeping having sex with powerful Kunoichi. Maybe finish up a couple of plot threads, add 1 or 2 girls and then finish things nicely. You can always save your ideas for another fic.
One thing I would appreciate for the future is if you tried having longer chapters maybe, even if it results in a shorter story overall. And maybe focus more on individual relationships. Smaller Harems probably? I am personally a big fan of NaruHina and feel like we didn't actually see much of them in this fic. Naruto "winning over" Sakura could also be a pretty nice storyline when fleshed out. Where as instead of raping,mind breaking, and then making her his cum dump it is more a gradual process (maybe starting from when they are genin or he comes back from his training trip)
Hell I don't know if you know about BigE2955, but he has two main series about Sasuke cuckolding Naruto (one where it gets out of handed and ends up being a Naruto bash, and another where it is a mutual undsrstanding and everyone is happy) but I always wanted a Naruto version of those. It could even be involving another couple (Ino/Sai, Choji/Karui, Shika/Temari are possible candidates). You already have a foot in that territory with how you treated Ino in this story so you would just have to make it go all the way.
Basically, I am saying that I would love to see you go from writing great smut with a bit of story, to a good story with great smut.
still waiting on for the following
ChÅchÅ Akimichi
Hanabi Hyūga
Sarada Uchiha
Tenten
Temari
Moegi Kazamatsuri
Samui
Ayame
Tsume Inuzuka
Hana Inuzuka
Mabui
Mebuki Haruno
okay so i would like to see the following girls in a showdo clone gangbag or something
I'll admit, I like the story elements probably just a bit more than I like the smut. I like the smut, too, but in smutty stories that are really plot heavy, the smut is like a reward for sticking with it, and is more satisfying for it.