Hmm. Yeah, it's a bit odd that we're finally getting Hinata chapters, but I'm fine with it lol. Though I was really hoping for more Kushina and Tsunade chapters. The Kushina especially, not just because of the taboo, but because I'm confused as fuck about the setting. And not in a bad way.
Something else I'm curious about. What the hell does Kurama think of what Naruto's been up to? He's quite different from the Naruto he befriended, though not necessarily in a bad way. He may not even care.
Any chance we could get a Mebuki chapter? The premise could be something like she finds out what's going on with Sakura, and attempts to convince Naruto to stop, only to end up being seduced by him. Or Kizashi's libido has sharply declined, and she's tempted after coming across Naruto and Sakura or something. There could be a variety of scenario's that lead Mebuki to Naruto.
Just a couple of ideas. If you aren't interested in including Mebuki, that's cool too.
Its always good to see another upload from you.
Also feel free to do what you will with what I suggested for Kurenai. If you feel it wont fit what you have for the story, then by all means don't use it. I won't hound you about it because I love how thought out your work is. Keep up the good work.
Clap Clap Clap Clap that was simply beyond words sniper one of the most vivid awesome lemons i've ever read and of the fact that you brought the pure love and trust naruto and hinata had for each other along with the awesome sex to go with it was just icing on the freshly baked cake that was your chapter just clinches it man just wow sniperjoe wow you should try braching out to hentai-foundry as well with your works too it's good to get another chapter from you too this was an amazing lemonade you wrote.
really great chapter, though the choking thing really isn't my kink you managed to porta it really well as part of a loving dom/sub relationship between naruto and hinata. very few people who write any kind of BDSM involve that or even the mention of aftercare that you did with the plans naruto had latter and the pure trust hinata has for naruto just made the whole thing hotter.
Damn, I loved how submissive Hinata is.
I think someone has already asked to see Kurenai, but I thought of what I think is a decent way to incorporate her.
It would have to take place before Naruto and Hinata have kids.
Kurenai could come to ask Hinata to take care of Mirai, reason being maybe her and Anko have a prior arrangement. Hinata would say she couldn't because she too had something to attend to(could be a clan thing or something with Hanabi).
So she suggests Naruto being free. Kurenai is reluctant, but Hinata insists because she wants him to have some experience handling kids before they have some of their own. Reluctantly agreeing, Kurenai gives Naruto a long list of what to do and how. Naruto laughs and says he got this, Kurenai leaves after he convinces her.
Once she comes back she notices Naruto is a natural with kids. Mirai becoming extremely attached to him after just the one day.
Seeing this, Naruto becomes her go-to babysitter for Mirai. By proxy Kurenai becoming closer to him as well. One day, Kurenai comes home early only to find Naruto having sex with Hinata or Anko seeing as they are both close to Kurenai. As they do the do, Naruto complains saying they have to be quiet seeing as Mirai is a sleep.
Kurenai just stands there overwhelmed. Never having seen one of her closest friend/student in such a way is aroused. Her repressed urges slowly begin to rise to the forefront of her mind. She slowly leaves once again in the distraction coming back later after they're done.
She continues to ask Naruto to help babysitting, subconsciously hoping to see Naruto in the act again. Sure enough it happens again. She gives in and gets aroused setting him in the act. She tries to hide as she pleasures herself, until Naruto catches her after dismissing whoever was his partner was this time. Finally Kurenai gives on to her temptation and kisses him fiercely and she becomes yet another conquest for Naruto.
Damn, didn't intend for this to be so long. I just want to see some Kurenai and Naruto action...
Possibly one of the best stories on this site, just please don’t flip it to whatever happens to almost all storys go through, like flipping it to sasuke or making naruto a girl “shudders”, but more importantly your doing an amazing job and I hope to see more.
Wow, a different style once again.
More of a teasing chapter. Very much a talking one.
I can see why you would make this and post it earlier over on FFN.
I think it's a hell of a tease though and I hope there is a Hinata 2 very soon.
I'll stay tuned for next saturday.
This is a great story. It's good to see Naruto being the king for once.
This latest chapter is amazing though I thought it would’ve been Naruto actually taking Hinata’s virginity still I enjoyed it very much thanks for the update
incredible chapter, hot and very telling, part of it I'm sure is that hinata is my favorite naruto girl. the way that naruto is slowly truly owning hinata yet as much as she wants to give in she is still fighting herself till she gave him what he wants. both in allowing him to work for her and to effectively allow naruto to turn her into a proper Uzumaki. by his standards. to expose her self fully to him. it's a perfect dom/sub relationship with care on both sides.