A very good chapter, the truth Hinata was not my favorite character of the series, but over time began to be my favorite.
I hope more of Kushina, Tsunade and if possible to future Himawari.
Another couple idea that I would like is a Fem Kyuubi something that I would like, there are not many stories of this type of couple.
And to revive the MILFS, this is difficult, if it has to be by method of the series itself. If it were for other methods yes, but I can not think of one.
Keep up the good work.
Great chapter. Even though I would have loved to see their actual first time (unless you have already done it and don't remember it.) I do like this insight into both of their characters. Humanising Naruto really helps the overall story.
For the Yandere character or someone who can just keep up with Naruto a good option could Tayuya if you go with the whole fan canon about her being an Uzumaki. Karin could also work out and you can also play with the idea that Naruto is projecting his anger for Sakura (most likely before he wins her) onto Karin because of her obsession with Sasuke.
As for the MILFs. Well if you don't like yhe whole Edo Tensei+Rinne Rebirth route that brought back Madara, then honestly I don't think there is anything else. You might have to start fishing around in other anime universes. Could just go crazy and have Naruto come accross the Dragon Balls, make a wish, and then Whis or one of Zenos's Angels just shows up to confiscate them since this is the wrong universe.
Great chapter m8. I like how you have naruto be firm and demanding but also gentle and caring when it came to hinata. I'm also curious about how naruto "trained" hinata and how their first time together went. As for the milfs part, I guess the only ones you can do at the moment without Edo Tensei would be Tsunade obviously, Kurenai, and mabe even adult Hanabi and Moegi. I'm assuming the milfs that would fall into the Edo Tensei category would be Mikoto, Kushina, Mito, and Konan if she counts. Ultimately it's up to you on the way you handle it. But great work so far m8
That was fucking adorable and sweet and perverse as all hell and I love it. I know I’ve said it before, but I really love how you handle NaruHina in the fic. It’s so rare to find good NaruHina smut like that. Really glad she got her own chapter after all this time.
That was a surprisingly sweet chapter! Also, I think there's a bigger audience for NGE smut than you might think. Just put out some of your ideas and we'll tell you what we think of them.
I feel a little sad for the attendant that she’ll never get any. Before I read she won’t be satisfied I thought maybe some other guy would fulfill her needs but I guess not. Good story as always and I gave you a follow on ffnet.
More Kushina!
Dude if you’re going RTN, I’d really like to see the following.
Minato cucked by Naruto fucking Kushina.
Menma cucked as Naruto 3somes both Hinatas.
Sasuke shamed as Naruto fucks RTN Mikoto.
either a chapter for each or all in one chapter - Ino and RTNIno, Sakura, Hanabi, etc.
I saw a review commenting on the fact they thought there was new stuff in chapter 2, so I went and gave it a re-read myself. You only really added to a couple parts, but what you did add definitely improved an already pretty damn good chapter. Expanding a bit on Naruto’s feelings at the time, putting more context as to why exactly it was happening, it’s all great stuff.
Now to read the fic over again to see if there’s any other new stuff.
Chapter 1: Amazing start. What the fuck how have I never seen this?
I came here from ffn. I just googled your story.
I made an account just to review.