Great work on the chapter with kushina i know incest is taboo but i would like to see a chapter about himawari
Awesome
Very nice I like! Are you planning to bring kushina into the real world? Any chance of seeing Kurenai? Perhaps when he gets back from the three year training or after pain attacks?
Awesome chapter, it looks like Kushina is starting to lose it
What a chapter
Continuation please
This... isn't terrible.
Like, no, I'm geniunely surprised by this chapter. Somebody posted it in my discord and said it wasn't 'so-bad', so I decided to check it out. And this isn't terrible. Frankly, this is pretty good, and I'm going to commend you on that as I should, because there's no point in not giving credit where credit is due.
The scenes between Kushina and Naruto in the beginning are very sweet. Him being pushed on a swing by his mother, something he always wanted as a kid; Kushina teasing him over his conquests. It's all very wholesome and sweet, which makes the next half of the chapter all too good.
Of course, Kushina's fall is rushed to our eyes but in the context of the story, you've made it clear with the Dream numbers that it's a long time coming. Going from her barely able to comprehend Naruto's sexual prowess, to desperately trying to arouse her unwilling son, to just... well, it's good. That's all I need to tell you.
The ending is a little weak, but a cliffhanger is never not effective and I find myself curious about what you'll do with the next chapter. Should be rather interesting.
Of course, this doesn't make up for the shitshow that was the earlier chapters, but still, this is... good. Really good; I'm very, very impressed, Mr. SniperJoe. Very impressed. Good work on this chapter, and I'm hoping that future ones will continue to be as solid as this one is.
Great chapter. Also one bit for more Kushina chapter's.
Still doing gods work you are.
Didn't think Kushina would fit into this at all. Good to see you are making it work.
I look forward to her eventual dicking.
that's some pretty sweet chapters you've uploaded since i checked in last.
awesome!