Hello i am a fan of your work and think you are a very talented writer. you excell at creating vivid scenes that are very detailed and original. i hope you continue writing more chapters. it seems that you favor ino but i would like to see a chapter more focused on hinata
Awesome that you introduced kushina. Your story is one of the VERY few stories on this website that makes me keep on coming back. Keep up the good work
This story is phenomenal. Please tell me you're going to write out the scene with the girls handcuffed and attached to the bar.
Well I'm glad to say that Slut Ino is really entertining! The scene where she all but shout that she's cheating on her husband and calling herself a slut was the hotest thing in the chapter. I'd suggest having Naruto claiming a girl he can pass around for favours like in those corrupt politic offices, but he's not the sharing type. As for suggestions of other girls, maybe those other Daimyos he saved like Haruna from Vegetable Country and Toki from Bird Country and the Priestess Shion from Demon Country and even the medic Amaru from the second movie.
Chapter 1
Oh my god, go on.
Chapter 2
Yes! Fuck Sasuke!
Rather, don't fuck him. Cuck that guy.
Chapter 3
I like that Hinata is getting special treatment. I love play with food in the kitchen and I hope you will incorporate more in the future
Some douche in Ficwad named funkmasterjo stole your story my guy.
http://ficwad.com/story/276775
Is this you?
do you plan on adding tenten soon or a kunoichi from another village like temari kurosutchi or one of the girls from kumo?