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October 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
so far so perfect you just need to add more lolicon, then have him dominate kaguya, add just about all other females you missed and this story will be the most ultimate perfect story of all time
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October 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love this story and saw on his other stories that he is back so maybe we can get some more of this soon.
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August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hope you come back one day. This was a great fic.
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August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ this story is amazing. The lemons are described beautifully, and the characters fit in the world you've made magnificently. 5/5 stars my friend and this is one of my new favorites.
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June 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
while the writing skill and lemon scenes so far in the fic are well done it seems the writer is biased towards some characters such as sakura ino and sasuke. If hinata is not able to satisfy naruto why is she treated like a woman and the other females like a whore????
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June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
R.I.P. to another great story. Good luck to all your future endeavors and have a great time inheriting the family business, SniperJoe.
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May 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was the best naruto story that wasn't yaoi on this site and now that it's not being updated I have no reason to come to this section anymore
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May 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
update soon,please.
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May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
^Ditto to that guy
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May 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope this story is not dead I know it said in the an that he's going to Jamaica for work I hope it all worked out I love this story