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April 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
[Chapter 4] Ignoring the smut, one thing that annoys me in a lot of Naruto Fics is where the Hokage can't do whatever he/she wants, the Hokage, the Dictator, the strongest Ninja in a village of them, leader of the ANBU, can be told no...How does that work? So I really like that when Naruto wanted something(to get ri of the Curse seal) he did it, no bullshit, he wanted it, he got it.
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April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love stories where there is a dominant role like this. Someone so strong and irresistible they don't need techniques, drugs, or BDSM to break women's wills. I also love getting into the head of the women as everything is happening and you've done an excellent job writing their stream of thoughts and actions. I really hope to see more.
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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Heyo! Just reread your works and have to say you manage to cram quite a bit of characterization in. Which is kinda surprising really. Absolutely adored the tsunami chapter and I add my voice calling for the pregnancy aspect to be explored. Definitely hinata. Definitely tsunami. You have a winning combination with this story also Sasuke as a cuckold is surprisingly excellent! Mostly because I really dislike the character. Keep it up!
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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm calling it this story is dead a shame to cause I think this outclassed a lot of naruto fics on this site
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March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn, that story is nothing short of hilarious. It's like every bad Naruto harem cliche in existence but written in such a way that it come out good. How the fuck are you doing this ? What sorcery is this ?!
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March 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fuck this story makes me hard I hope everything goes well for you and your family and I hope you update soon
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March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me this is it I really hope you're not done yet
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March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here(if you're busy I'm sorry) please tell me this story won't go unfinished this story is the only reason why I check the naruto section on this site
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March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's funny, but you can see that Naruto really both loves and hates this lifestyle. It's interesting
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March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you didn't forget this godsend of literature please update soon