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Do you have a Patreon? This deserves money.

Do a Naruto/Kushina sex scene where he meets her while trying to control his hatred and he dominates her

I must say, I have enjoyed the smut so far (ch 13). Unlike your regular porn, you spend more time exploring what people are thinking - something really only done with written medium - than the mechanics of their actions. Which are pretty hot as well, though :) Got to love the descriptions with Ino and Hanabi, and jeez, Sakura/Sarada have completely different backstories. You glossed over some details at times - good. There's only so many ways you can describe unknown woman getting pounded, after all. Still, the end of Inuzuka chap 2 did make me wonder - usually, these sort of stories lack a villain. But is the villain Naruto's inner issues? Or would it be better to call him even villain protagonist, given his treatment of Sasuke and Sakura? In any case, he seems to be bit deluding himself.

Oh my god I can't believe that I've been missing this gem all along with all the sasuke worship and other fucked up fics on this site I swear this is like a breath of fresh air thank you so much for the change and I hope every thing goes will in Jamaica and I hope you come back soon

Wonderful job on this chapter.

And another rabbit falls down the hole... Damn I hope you update soon.

Poor Sai. Unlike Sasuke, who is a dick and needs public shaming, I hope Sai gets a better ending. I'd suggest Ino uses her clan's mental arts to enter his mind and possibly see if she can fix the damage Danzo did to him. Set him loose with a sex drive on the civilian girls and have him get a huge harem of girls that love a gentle guy or posing as his nude models for pictures. At the very least I would like to see Sai get some respect from Naruto, after all he pretty much said he can't make Ino happy and Naruto can. It takes a big man to admit that, so I hope Ino at least makes home life a happy place for Sai.

Hope you will at least enjoy your travel plan. Nice to see I no finally submit completely. I will be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. Thanks for the quick update pace so far.

And Ino gives in entirely! Fantastic work, I can't wait to see another Tsunade or Shizune! Keep up the fantastic work!

awesome chapter bro good luck in jamacia hope everythin works out and i cant wait to see where this goes