rate_review Reviews

Nice chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.

super sexy story. I like how its not just curse words stringed together.
Also the submissiveness of Ino was great. She was worshiping him while also showing shame. This Naruto is also really alpha.

The great thing about this story, aside from Naruto domming women into submission, is how you bring in some depth to the story. Like Naruto wating to be more than just a dick to these women and how said women al react to him. It's refreshing

Dang, a bit grim at the end, but I can see the next generation of Inuzuka coming out with natural dog ears and tails since Naruto is so powerful it would probably magnify their bestial nature. Plus, the image of a bunch of little dog girls and boys chasing after the current incarnation of Tora is very amusing.

Hmmm, not much to say except Naruto is da man for taking all those horny bitches in one day.

Ah, it's so good to be able to review again! Both the last chapter and this were great, I love what you did with the Inuzuka and making them more animalistic, but with a definite human mentality. Keep up the awesome work!

As for people I would love to see, well all we've seen is Konoha people, but what about all the princesses he's saved, and the diplomats (like Temari), I'm sure that some of the females would kill to be diplomats!

LOVED the wedding chapter and would really like to see a conclusion!!

hey i wanted to review wedding part 1 but computer was not work at the time so i thoght i review both at the same time with wedding to me it was good but hard to follow and that may have been one reason for a drop in reviews but i think you did way better with this chapter it was great to see these bitches get fucked and the evil for shadowing is awesome but scary to think anyway keep it up and i vote naruto fucked his beatuful wife and daugther or maybe himawari and sarada together with cho cho would be hot

Tsunade probably wouldn't be a bad choice, but she'd be old as all fuck by now. Unless Orochimaru shared some immortality secrets with her that'd be some straight up old lady sex.

you uploaded the wedding 1 chapter about an hour before the site crashed. you just have really bad luck.
this chapter was great. i love how feral you made the inuzukas. it would be great to see kiba's reaction to naruto being the new alphas of the inuzukas and the father of his new little sibling.
pregnancy stuff with sakura and hinata would be great.
also a tsunade chapter, maybe use a jutsu to age her down.
i really want a karui chapter. i just picture choji being completely chill about the whole thing. kissing karui on the cheek as she goes off to see naruto and when she gets back having dinner ready for her. and raising any of naruto's kids alongside his daughter.
also samui, mei, and temari would be great additions.
but whatever you write next will be great. and all of us will be here to read it.

Yes there was glitch in which us readers could not review for a good amount of days and it happened when you uploaded the wedding chapter .Also, we couldn't read until two days after you uploaded so I guess that stopped many people from reviewing because of that. Overall I really like the wedding chapter and would love to see the conclusion of that night. And great job on this chapter as well. Still want to see some Samui action. Don't know if it's canon that she's with Darui but I'm sure there is a way to write around that.