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Awesome chapter like always. If possible it would fantastic to see a Tsunade chapter in the future

While not wanting a plot, you're laying an interesting underlayer you know. It would be quite interesting if you were to do something similar to Eroninja by TheLemonSage. Taking the smut, use it as unifying plot point, and extend it into an over arching story. Though admittedly it's probably a lot more work than you sound to be interested in taking.
At any rate, thanks for the update. And hoping to see Tsunade sooner than later.

For a while the site went through a facelift and no one could review it wasn't because they didn't like a certain chapter we line all your chapters the site was just going through some maintinence diifficulties

Didn't expect you to return to Inuzuka theme so soon.But the chapter was really good, especially Tsume's profession of loyalty.I think the theme has exhausted itself.I don't doubt you could still write something spectacular about the Inuzukas, but I, personally wouldn't be much into into it anymore.
I didn't hate Wedding 1.In fact I'm still curious as to which direction it's going to take.Said it my last review and I'll say it again - more of the same characters.Don't know actually if you want there to be character development at all, but if you do, this is the path you should take.Seeing women become servants of Natuto's cock is hot and all, but it has a limit.In the Onsen 3(I think) Naruto mentioned wanting to find a woman that wouldn't immediately become his after a glance at his cock.That would be rally interesting to see.
As to what I wouldn't mind seeing.Honestly, I just want you to continue writing this, because no matter what characters you take you manage to make it a very good read.But my personal favorites are Ino(a scene with Sakura, or she can find some dignity and become that woman I mentioned earlier) and Anko(it could be a chapter telling how she came to in that position we find her in that first chapter or how Naruto turned her).
Thank you and good luck.

Wedding wasn't bad it was just unexpected and so people got confused, sad and started the zombie apocalypse

Even though she's dead i would love to see kushina.

Solid chapter as always, From what I saw the website updated the layout when they changed servers a while back and there was an issue that kept people from reviewing anything, they also changed views to catpokes. I'm a little surprised that you didn't put Hana in someway with Tsume for Naruto to see if even that was a line they were willing to cross for him and as a precursor to the Sarada/Sakura shared relationship. Did you ever decide if you were going to do a Himawari chapter? Keep up the good work.

another great chapter. u really knocked it out of the park with this one, plz do one with kurenai or at least another anko one, hell maybe just throw them together for a threesome

Add chojis daughter,

Loving your work dude and am very eager to see more hinataloving. You say the wedding scene was mayb3 a failure but it just lacked the usual amount of sex. Though really looking for the next chapter. Could you also do a hinata pregnant scene. Your fan chillman