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January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Are you going to do another Anko chapter?
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January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Boruto always seemed like a jerk to his father, so have naruto use permanent sexy jutsu on boruto.
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January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
My man how do you keep pumping out pure gold like that I mean it's friggin amazing and I'm just on edge waiting for the next chap hopefully we get to see Kurenai and Mirai or sweet Shizune and what's with the beastiality tag I want to know what you have in store with that shit I'm just excited man
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January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that the beastiality tag you have has to do have the bijiu..
I love what you've done so far, i can't wait for me
I love what you've done so far, i can't wait for me
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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i've been waiting three days to review this. you really uploaded this chap at the worst time.
but anyway, this was a really good beginning and i hope to see more of the wedding. also more with ino and sai.
also i really wanna see sakura's wedding night with sasuke having to sit in the corner and watch.
but anyway, this was a really good beginning and i hope to see more of the wedding. also more with ino and sai.
also i really wanna see sakura's wedding night with sasuke having to sit in the corner and watch.
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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You chose a new new interesting path/theme for this story.I'm not surprised.I think it has potential, whether it's solely about Naruto and Hinata's honeymoon or with Sakura involved, both would be interesting and hot to read.
Liked Sakura's thoughts in this chapter(you always seem to nail those).Some characters are starting to take shape for me ( mainly Sakura and Hinata).Hope that happens with more of them.For that, you'll need to include more of the already involved characters(Sakura,Ino,Hinata) and add other girls gradually.
Hope next chapter's longer though, this felt like a teaser.
Thank you and good luck.
Liked Sakura's thoughts in this chapter(you always seem to nail those).Some characters are starting to take shape for me ( mainly Sakura and Hinata).Hope that happens with more of them.For that, you'll need to include more of the already involved characters(Sakura,Ino,Hinata) and add other girls gradually.
Hope next chapter's longer though, this felt like a teaser.
Thank you and good luck.
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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Man, reading your stories here is awesome, especially love Kage Sexbomb. Do you do your work anywhere else like say fanfiction or Hentai Foundry by chance?
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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Glad to know that your stories aren't review driven, the couple of days where people couldn't review probably would have been a bummer for you if it was. I really like this story so I'm always happy to see a new chapter posted, hope you keep it up. Is there any chance you might write a Mei Terumi chapter? It kind of goes against the narrative of the Kage being the most dominant/strong in their respective villages but could be explained that her submitting to Naruto is the reason why she steps down as Mizukage at a relative young age in cannon.
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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Naruto dominates his wife and the women around him. Who else will he get? Will he get anyone from other animes?
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January 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter but still enjoyable. Although I am looking forward more to Himawari than more Inuzuka since their relationship would spice things up more.