rate_review Reviews

really good chapter. the first half shows how naruto may be fucking every girl in sight but he's still naruto at heart. with just a bit more alpha male.
the second half was great too. you write the best lemons on this site.

i hope in the next chapter we get more from sakura and sasuke and, ino and sai.

PS the way you humiliated sasuke by him needing permission to touch his own wife is what boosted this story to the top of my list of favorites.
hope you have more stuff like that planned ahead.
also maybe for sai you could give him a cuckolding fetish which would explain his impotence. and have him ask naruto to seduce ino.
or maybe naruto finds one of sai's sketchbooks with drawing of naruto and ino fucking and confronts him with it.

Amazing story can't wait for naruto to fuck temari, maybe have yoshino help convert her away from the lazy naras

Great chapter as always. Can't wait til the next one

Bloody hell this just gets better and better.
Kinda looking forward to Sai taking 'sloppy seconds'

Great job with writing this dominant Naruto and also thanks for the timeline. Makes the story have some sort of cohesion rather than the other stories that feel like one-shots with no continuity.

Love It!

Nice man. Keep up the good work

Yet another terrific chapter!I like how it doesn't just focus on the actual sex parts of smut, but on the psychological part as well.It's very hot to read the thoughts of the girls as well as the smut itself.
The timeline really helps as well.Makes it feel like an actual story and not just a collection of one-shots.
Thank you and keep up the good work.I wish all the inspiration you need to keep writing this.

Great story don't stop the updates

This fic is a rather interesting little bird, and quite frankly I'm tired of the 'every girl cheats on their husband with Sasuke' thing that has been around since the Naruto fandom started and only gotten worse since the series ended. It's rather nice to see Naruto getting the attention, anyway the way the timeline goes reminds me quite a bit of the Tenchu series where the first game is not actually the 'first' in the story but instead it's the sequel that's the first in the story, then you get Tenchu Kurenai taking place between Tenchu 1 and 3 and then after THAT you finally get the actual follow up to 3 which is the game on the Wii. The timeline for that series (also about Ninja, funnily enough) and this fic bounce around from where you think they should be, but unlike the Tenchu series until after it was over (they ain't made a new one in years) you were kind enough to include a timeline at the start of each chapter which I'm very grateful for. Keep up the good work, I'm interested to see just how far this fic goes.