rate_review Reviews

whoa! I mean wow. hahaha.... that was just a lot of fun to read. On this site there are so many stories of naruto either getting cheated on, or just being hated that his wife cheats on him that this was actually really refreshing! I mean, I can actually see the rivalry between Naruto and Sasuke (especially with their last fight), them betting something once Kakashi retires. While (with what we know of your world) Naruto wouldn't risk his wife (and canon world) even if he is busy he loves them, Sasuke is never even in the damn village and his daughter at 13 didn't even know if he knew she was born. (yes Naruto while flawed is the better dad). I can see Sasuke betting something like his wife for the seat of Hokage while Naruto would cherish his new wife to much to risk her and therefore not bet such a thing. His winning or losing aren't as important as the bet itself or the circumstances of the bet. Sasuke showed what he would risk for power and Naruto chose family first. (this is why this is a good story.

the "lemon" that followed. well, I am a guy, I don't know the pleasures that a woman feels during sex. If Naruto was a better lover (insert super P.C. demands), that is great. It seems that Sakura still loves Sasuke after what happens, and Sarada will be born and loved by her family. Yes Naruto is a better lover but I liked the fact that the physical enjoyment didn't in the end sway Sakura, (while the vengeful" part of me like her realizing what she had lost"). The lemon was well written and didn't make Sasuke a (monster like another auther does for Naruto). Yes Naruto was better at sex but Sakura still stayed with Sasuke. No one was a piece of shit in your story, which is why it is fun to read. please write a new chapter soon! you are one of the few that actually let naru/hina be canon without fucking it up, but create an interesting world. can't wait to see where you go with it. (maybe in the future some bolt/sarada...it might be cute. Keep up the great work.

Great stuff. Loved that Anko got in the first chapter, and loved that she was completely sub. I hope Tsunade, Tsume and the other older kunoichi also get the domination treatment from this Hokage Naruto.

this is surprisingly good, thank you.

To be honest I didn't expect much from this story when I looked at the title, but I decided to read it anyway because of the lack of M/F stories here.
But you know, never judge the book by its cover, as they say.It turned out to be a very well-written story with decent grammar and some very hot scenes.Hope to see much more of this in the future.
I would also love to see more of Ino and maybe throw Kushina, Mei or Ten Ten in the mix somehow(not asking you to, just something I'm not opposed to seeing.)
All in all - very good job, sir.

MOAR!

Please do more this is awesome

this is the best fanfiction even. the best premise and the best writing.
i really loved the description of the relationship between sakura and sasuke. having to ask naruto for permission for everything. would love to see more of that

also for ino and sai. maybe you could have sai approve of naruto seducing ino. maybe even have him involved like a threeway datenight.
maybe with him serving naruto and ino a romantic dinner. and holding ino's hand while naruto reshapes her pussy in their wedding bed.

but anyway. i can't wait for more. i'll probably be checking the front page constantly until you update again.

I enjoy this fic and hope you continue

Well, this is different. That's a compliment, by the way. Usually it's Naruto who gets cheated on and that's gotten sooooo freaking old. I like that there's at least one story that breaks that well-used mold.

Yeah! I like this story already, even if delves into kinks I don't like! Keep it up! Sadly my favorite part is how literate and articulate you are when typing. If that tells you the overall quality of stories thus far. Hopefully you can update fairly regularly as well and not drop off like so many others. Good luck!