rate_review Reviews

you are my new favorite author. you have excellent attention to detail. and the dirty descriptions in ino's mind are amazing.

also really hope you add sakura. maybe add in sasuke's knowing about it either begrudgingly accepting his wife needs a better man,
or you could have him become a full cuckold. actively encourage naruto and sakura, and getting turned on at the humiliation.

This chapter was so good. The descriptions, the inner dialogue between Sakura and her Inner, the superiority of Naruto over Sasuke. You're definitely a great writer. Love the fast updates and just keep em coming. I'm not really demanding these girls but I am hopeful that you will get to write Temari, Samui, Shizune, Karui, Hanabi, Kurenai and her daughter.

this chapter is even better than the first.
could also have sarada find out about naruto and sakura, with her starting to look at naruto as more of a father than sasuke.

hope you have naruto use a jutsu to cut off sasuke's chakra and make him watch his wife be a slut for naruto.
maybe break his will and force him to be naruto's butler.
having to clean up after naruto and sakura.

thank you. There is an author on this site who seems to write stories for the sole reason of making Naruto a terrible person and his wife "Hinata" and daughter run off just to be f$#@ by others. While you are doing the opposite in some sense, you at least gave a reason to. Anko, chose her actions as a reward, Sasuke bet his own wife "while out of character gives a reason". "unlike the un-named author I mentioned you atleast dont' go (insert sakura for hinata in following comment) " (hintata) I really hate you sasuke for all you've done to my husband. (sasuke) bend over bitch you are now mine. (Hinata) Oh god you are the lord of sex..... at least in your recent chapter you gave a damn reason, sasuke was dumb enough to bet his wife... what asshole mother fucker bets something like that. after the first chapter (where I can understand the world) I can see Naruto taking some pleasure in the one woman that he chased for so long, and letting her know that what he did was a one time event because of her husband whether good or bad.