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for Kage Sexbomb

by SniperJoe

person snow013
schedule September 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

so in this timeline naruto already claimed tsunade huh......the dreams are kinda confusing lol

person snow013
schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i feel like you took the bar idea from a certain image drawn by a certain hentai artist lol

person snow013
schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i really wish this story keep going and going....as you said there's not enough good smut naruto fics

person snow013
schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

tbh i didn't really like kuranai chapters....and i thought you didn't really build up a real bond between them for her to break this easily...she barely know him after all and build up has been your strongest point......the best example of build up i can mention is tsunade arc

i was happy when i found there are 30 chapters here.....and a bit sad that there's only 2 tsunade chapters but as i mentined you're doing a great job with their build up...i apperciate not doing a timeskip after tsunade 1 straight to sex and showing her training and fawning over naruto......not to mention your hints about the club arc make me pumped up to see what you're planning for it

have a nice day

person tgms
schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

fantastic chapter, i want kurenai 3 asap lol

person elchabon
schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Very, very good chapter.
Kurenai's point of view, this is great.
Sorry for the delay.
Keep it up.

person snow013
schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

found this gem in ff and i can't believe there are 30 chapters here....hope there are more tsunade here thou

schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Fun change-up with how this chapter was written compared to the others. I’m enjoying the buildup on this set of chapters, the payoff should be very fun to see. Getting her mostly uninterrupted thought process is a great way to show Naruto’s slow effect on the women in his life  

Always glad to see you update this fic, it’s my favorite that’s on the site right now. 

person GWing
schedule September 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I've created an account purely to be able to review this fic and say that its the best adult fic I've ever written. The sec scenes are really well written and the backstory and emotional connections of the characters are woven in well.

 

I really like the whole internal struggle Sakura is going through with loving Naruto but not feeling worthy of telling him. Makes me wonder what happened for Sarada to be born and how she felt about having a child for someone other then Naruto. The same os true for Ino as well I suppose but her emotional connection to Naruto is less deeply developed at the moment.

 

I look forward to reading more whenever you can post abd reguarly check to see if theres an update. So thank you for writilng this amazing fic

person Gmon01
schedule September 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Also, how exactly is Kurenai going to raise Mirai? Will she raise her normally until she's eighteen and introduces her to Naruto or will she train her to worship him from birth?