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for Surrogate

by Geist

person Lolita_pen
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just read the 8th chapter of your story and I'm so happy to see the interaction of Shino and Hachi in her bed. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter update. Hopefully they get together! Lol

Also, you write shino's conversation with Kiba so well! I love how Kiba reacted to Shino's words. That was killer! Keep up your amazing work!

-Cherry
person Lolita_pen
schedule January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Darling I am loving this story so far! And your OC is darling, honey. I love how you've characterized her so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I also have an OC that I ship with Shino, so I have a fondness for Shino/OC fics... ya know, as there aren't that many out there. Lol

You also write very well. The sentence structure, the descriptions are on point and it really makes you feel like you're right there with the characters! Hope to read more soon! And keep up the good work!

-Cherry