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January 2, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Increible
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May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so much fun :)
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April 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM
More dude make more
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March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved this fanfic it is better than any fanfic lemon Ie ever read thank you or making this......but when naruto said "Are you ready for another wild night?" That was not such a cliffhanger but i wish the story never ended never ever i wanted it to go on forever until naruto captures every female ninja in 'Naruto' this includes the ones in Akatsuki and for it to go on until it gets boring 'also make it very kinky'
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December 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very hot story hope to see Koyuki, Kurotsuchi and Mabui.
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December 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kushina chapter please!
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December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
By more detail I mean don't just repeat over and over every time he has sexy time with one of the girls that it went on for an hour, the girls came 4 times (which you've used most of the time) and then Naruto blows and then next scene. Slow it down, flesh out some dialogue, description of emotion or feelings more, and describe the lemons better than he thrusts in, they come, he comes, Salura does this or Ino does that. Describe what's going on, whether the setting, the surroundings, or the pace and position, etc.
you're doing fantastic, keep it up!
you're doing fantastic, keep it up!
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December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty darn good story! And also your updates are impeccable! So quick! The only thing I would ask you to do would go into more detail with the lemons. Describe more from both sides of the action. Most of it is just cookie cutter from the previous ones with some interesting and unique dialogue from each girl. While I like the story and the update time, it needs more detail.
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December 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How about Samui, Sasame, Yugao, Guren, Fuka, Pakura, Shizuka, Tsume, Hana, or Anko?
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December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more chapters? maybe make this a story? if so cant wait to see what is next