Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this story before. This is worlds away from 99% of the stories posted on this website in terms of writing ability alone and I absoutely love the descriptive nature of your writing style.
The plot is also very interesting and while I agree with the other readers and would have preferred this to be a strictly Naruto/Sakura story, I can't help but wonder if you might actually be the first person that writes a harem fanfic that doesn't want to make me bash my screen into pieces.
I can only hope that you take your time to develope the emotions between the characters properly. The greatest challenge I can see in adding one or more addtional girls into Naruto's polyarmorous relationship, is doing so in a non-repetetive way that doesn't rely on cliches.
Nevertheless I trust you to do atleast your best, and from the way things are looking, that just might be enough.
Hope to see and update soon, this really turned out to be one of my favourite stories on this site, ever.
amazing work this is by far my favorite story on this site haha. And i am glad to hear you will be taking the story seriously its amazing and wish you all the best. also ugghh that ending >.< cant wait for next update! keep up the amazing work
Interesting chapter
Your stories are generally very good. The only problem I could say I have with them is the time between updates.
Just as great as I remembered it being, can't wait for the next chapter! Glad to see you updating again.
This, like all your other stories, is incredibly good. Can't wait for more!
Sincerely,
Reader
Hey this story is great so far. When is the next chapter?
I know this review isn't very helpful but still want to say it.
Post. The. Next. Chapter!
One of the very few fics out there that doesn't make me go "durrrrrr" when I read it. It's an exciting story about a boy who discovers a power inside of him that he can use to get whatever he wants. And he's learning fast!
I hope you're not getting any flames for this. It'd be undeserved!
You, sir, are a genius! :D
UPDATE
I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue it.
Please update soon! Really loving this story.