I dream of the day this story updates.
love it
Moar please!!!
If love to see tayuya and fu theyre some of my favorites.
Wow, great story! Hoping for an update soon.
Ok. So this is officially my favorite story of yours now. I read your Kim Possible story years ago and was waiting for updates on that, but having read this I desperately hope you continue this story soon.
You write the best erotic fiction ive ever seen, bar none.
Sorry, part II here. Just wanted to throw my two cents in for who should be next. I really like the lineup in the list you posted in chapter 1, honestly. Ino then Hinata then Tenten and so on. Tenten gets surpisingly little love in these sorts of fics, usually she's tossed in midway through as authors remember she even exists, I'd really like to see you(and naruto) do her justice ;).
Again, you do fantastic work, here's hoping you've already started on the next chapter and don't need my advice.
PLEASE update soon this is amazing great job. :)
I loved this. Really hoping it gets updated soon.
To start off with, I had to reset my password just to review this as I hadn't logged in in forever.
Now as for the actual review.
This is one of the best damn stories on the website hands down. I do hope you keep running with this as the story is amazing. Its well written, thought out, makes logical sense, and in general has the best writing I've read in a long time. I've read through it a few times and it still is really good. I hope you will continue to run with this plot.
The fact that it's persuading someone with genjutsu instead of with pure mind control and the like, it lets you keep people in character far better without having to mold or change them before you can have them do their part. For instance, the flashing scene with sakura, really well done in the sense that she stayed in character yet still did something against her will, so to speak, and still reacted as she should have before and after the fact.
Keep up the good work!