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Amazing story, with real quality writing. A few spelling errors here and there, but other than that the writing is just incredible. It's hard to write something that's both sweet and hot, both innocent and kinky, but you do a real good job of it. The characterisations are also pretty much spot on (even though Kurenai seemed a bit off with how she ran away), so I can't wait to see what you do with other characters. Your list of women you want to include is pretty long, so I hope you don't drown in them like most harem stories tend to do or start to ignore girls like sakura along the way, cause that would be a shame. Personally not too interested in the mothers (just not fleshed out enough in the show) but seeing how you weren't afraid to shoot down other suggestions in favour of a coherent story, I've got hopes that you do something good with them. Keep up the good work and looking forward to read more from you!

fantastic yet again. seriously, you have a gift. one thing im wondering is if you will ever write in naruto influencing ppl to tell him about his past and maybe influencing ppl to teach him(he could get kakashi to talk casually about himself and maybe kakashi could actually teach naruto and sakura a little, maybe even teach naruto rasengan? since kakashi knows it?) anyway, food for thought. he could learn so much with this from so many. and with shadow clones you can just send them away to train if you don't want to go in depth with it.

i dont know what anybody else think, but i really like this story

question, how do I met this story down and shot it directly in to my vein? love the fic, can't wait to read more.

You know I just think it's nice they got sleep and I'm really enjoying the whole story overall right now and can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what's going to happen with Mebuki. Will Naruto persuade her not to hit him, will Sakura protect him, guess I'll have to wait and see

this story is absolutely amazing. please keep adding more chapters I would hate to see this story die out like so many others.

moooorrrrreee hope for sakuras mother

amazing chapter and i like my porn with plot at least when its this amazing and for the womem who are already in a relationship like sakuras mom can you do it like from the secret technique where naruto just steals them from there husband and stuff and i would also greatly enjoy if they get pregnant down the line to it makes it go full circle for me and naruto always wanted a family and glad kurenai is on the list asuma doesnt deserve that seriously anyway love your story and cant wait for more haha.

amazing story want to see what sakuras mom is gonna do with that frying pan haha

Actually, what I like to read is this kind of story : things not so easy, some fun, some psychology. That or a good big smut ^^. But you told us that it won't be the case, and I can only support you in your choice. I liked the way the thoughts of Sakura changed. And I'm impatient to know how these 2 birds will manage to est the wrath of Merumy. On another note : does it mean that Naruto persuasion was on the entire village or solely on him ? Will the girls involve in his relationships will know about each others?