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Anko?

Hey man you story is awesome just go with what you prefer its the best story on this site so far. Keep it up

Well written. I liked it alot and hope you keep writing....and maybe adding a time jump too...

Ignore all the people asking for smut this . This right here is quality work. Best story/sex fic in this site thats is as far as i know on going. This is great. All i sk is that while depraity isll nice and good. Keep the promise yea? Lso yoy should tottaly mae naruto forget hehaspower and bechaed out of the house XD.also hile i do them sex thetory is hat rally maks the sex more meaningful than just well smutni guess. Hat im trying tonsay is that this right hre i thehigh Class ecort to the street hockerstha is mos of this ste tories. Keup the good ork. Srry for splling keyboard broken.

Very good stuff. I have been waiting for the next chapter of this story and I am pleased to say it was well worth it. I do enjoy that you are focusing on an actual plot line instead of just smut. The sex scene between Naruto and Sakura says a lot about both characters without obviously stating it.

man, those detail was insane. the pacing, the narrating, your way of describing is awesome. you are just like "The Lemon Sage" praise aside, do you plan to add Mei Terumi and Konan in Naruto target in the future ? Mei is every boy dream of mature woman and Konan has that elder sister charm. And finally what is your update schedule 2 weeks ? 1 month ? Again you are fu*king awesome

Dammit, who the hell writes smut chapters this long?? With all distractions (fap-fap-fap) it takes ages to read it! Jokes (or not..) aside, Naruto in first half of chapter came out quite disguising. I can understand wanting reveng or simply taking advantage of obedient girls, but thinking that forcing himself on someone is fine just because he loves them is simply wrong. I think I've seen that line of thoughts once or twice coming from mouth of fat-ass otaku in doujins. Speaking of, have you read Ninja Independence vol.7? Sakura is, on other hand, in second part quite sweetheart. . You said you've done your research. So, how does fit in Hinata's mother, who is long dead? . All that aside, your work is superb. I had not seen such quality in some time. While some of my favorite fics still update frequently, they don't have this attention to details you have.

But really, if all chapters are gonna be this good, you simply have to write Naru/Ino scenes! And sooner is better. The only other smut fic with Ino that have such quality is 'X-Ranked Missions' by Serious Sam. Too bag author got distracted with his other AU fic..

Fucking fantastic job on this chapter! You could done this in many typical ways that I've seen other writers do in this situation with Naruto manipulating Sakura's emotions, most seem to want to break and abuse her and I feel like it's just a cop out to downplay and hate on that girl. I'm and avid NaruHina fan but I wholeheartedly support NaruSaku when it's done right. Exposing her emotional frailty and dependency for approval from others gave Naruto a chance to make her see she could have all the love, support, reassurance she craves for and more with him since we all know how much he worshiped Sakura Pre-Shippuuden. This is good stuff right here man, I'm honestly on my seat waiting to see how you work Mebuki and Hinata in on this, more power to you fam!

I've read a lot of stories over the years but this is easily one of the better ones out there. What ever you do please keep going.