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May 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well I wouldn't mind Seeing a female Haku or Naruto use his powers to get Sasuke turned into a girl would be entertaining if you're interested. Other then that it depends on if you plan to keep this in Kohoha or be able to bring in girls from other countries.
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May 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see you add girls from other villages they can be visiting. Would really like to see Samui, Mabui, Kurotsuchi, Mei Terumi and Koyuki included.
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that this is a great story it's very hard to find a gem on this site. That being said I'd like to ask you to update more often. I know there is real life to attend to but 3 months between updates seems pretty long for the amount of content per chapter.
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Haku or Tsunami?
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
is Natsu Hyuuga Hinata’s mom? Can you add Hanabi? Female Jinchuriki’s? FemSasuke or femGaara? Tayuya and maybe Karin? Konan (she would be in the same or younger age ranges as the other women)
Wouldn’t Mikoto break the plot in a worse way than Kushina being alive?
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter...good Characterization of both Naruto and Sakura, Very nice to see some good narusaku fiction on here.
Keep up the good work.
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really good writing. The development is going at a believable rate and I'm curious to see how much of future chapters will be story and how much will be smut. I do love Sakura's reactions and I'm looking forward to see how Naruto embraces or seeks to control his new powers.
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April 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Could use some more proofreading, noticed maybe a dozen obvious typos, which is a dozen too many
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April 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
nice story when are you going to add a second chapter.
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April 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
If Kin is on here why not Tayuya aswell?