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March 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Its a literal crime if this does not continue. its legit brilliant and SOOOOOO well written. keep this slow pace please as well.
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March 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Arr, not yet?! Come on,give to us more! There's too little completed fics this superb!
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March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Meh i would suggest that you stay with cannon characters that are alive for now. No reason to completely ignore the plot, unless ur idea of her being alive is somewhat realistic, or interesting. so far i like the idea it very interesting. Girl wise i think ino should be next ;D
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March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was awesome! just the perfect level of revenge without feeling creepy
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March 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* Still nothing? I've becoming restless..
By the way, do you have this fic on FF.Net as well? Can you? It'd be really great if you do, 'coz there's really convenient android reader that makes following fics easy. And portable. And stuff.
... I'm not ever sure what that means, but eh, whatever. Update sooner! Before I gone mad.
Ah, one more thing. Kinda personal request. NaruIno is my most favorite pairing, and is you could focus on it just a bit more than on rest pairings, I'll be really glad!
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March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Actually went in a direction I wasn't expecting, seeing Naruto so clueless and Sakura so angry was a lott'a fun. Wondering if Naruto'll catch on soon though.
Either way, looking forward to more for sure! As for the women: Gender bending (Haku and Gaara especially) and FemKyubei are basically cliches at this point, I'd prefer not to see them. The big ones I'd look forward to seeing are Hinata, Hanabi (seperate and together) and Shizune.
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March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
dammit, I can't stop rereading chapter. Please, uodate sooner!
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March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I am wondering just how the Genjustu is set. Like is it set in Konoha, or does it radiate a certain distance from Naruto? If the second, it could be possible to to include some of the filler characters, movie characters and non-Konoha women.
As for preference, I would love to see Fu. Though, it would be a bit humorous if it turned out that she was immune or easily broke the effects on her and she just wanted to fuck Naruto.
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
If you can, please don't involve already dead girls. Namely, Mikoto and Hinata's mother. And Kin, if this is post-invasion.
If you really must, at least use something like Edo Tensei (Ressurection technique). Bringing people back alive randomly rarely do any good to fic; I have yet to see good one. And this story so far is quite interesting and logical, it would be shame if fic becomes one of those.
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March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please, don't genderbend anyone permanently. There's Oiroke jutsu. And Naruto entirely too willing to use it.