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i thought it was great.

Yeah, this played out a great deal better than I was anticipating. I can dig it, awaiting future chapters.

First, love this story. Premise is great and you can make the genjutsu on Konoha a permanent thing by saying some bullshit like 'the jutsu bonded with the barrier surrounding the village, affecting all who enter even once'. That being said, Anko NEEDS to be in this. You can use pretty much any Konoha girl as well as any who visit. The chunin exams sounds like it will be fun. Kushina (or at least her chakra) is currently sealed in Naruto so you don't have to go too far out of your way to get her. Also, Tsunade is HOT. Old or not, though that is your preference. Use the wiki and take this story to its full potential! May the wiki be with you!

Kurenai but no anko that's a first

very good. I really like the idea of this. I'm wondering how the girls are included or how long it will take for Naruto to realize that the genjutsu worked. The genjustu uses commands and not he probably wont say suck my dick or something along these lines so often to other girls. I like to see you continuing this story.

Very nice as a begining.

Do the girls have to be from Konoha? Because I'd like to see Koyuki in this.

great story cant wait for the chapter

I wouldn't mind seeing Anko or Tayuya being compelled. That would be fun!

That's the best story I've read in a very long time. Please update quickly. also if at some point you could include moegi and hanabi. but please do more sakura. i need her to have to go all the way with him.