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by Dot

person Omega
schedule May 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I really have enjoyed this story. I hope you might consider posting it of FanFiction (dot) net, because you will get more views there and I'd like to see this story get more praise. I can't wait to see what else will happen now.
person Pyr00tje
schedule May 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was very sceptical when I saw the "personality switch" in the story's summary but I'm glad I've given it a try. It's very well written and I like some of the subtle and not-so-subtle changes in the story that you've created. I do wonder why this is on aff.org. See no smut anywhere yet! It needs smut! :D But for a story this good... I'll be patient! Update soon!
schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's a really interesting concept. Looks like you're taking it a little slow to develop it, which is good. I do wonder if Naruto will keep his reserved personality as his power starts to grow though, especially when it starts to eclipse Hinata's, but I suppose that's not for a while yet. Anyhow, interested in what you've got next for sure