rate_review Reviews

I love how unfitting your pen-name is. You completely debase Kushina, and turn her into a mindless cumdump. If that's what you believe love is, then I hope you never find anyone to 'love'. This fic is disgusting in so many ways, that it amazes me. How one can enjoy writing this, or even thinking it, I'll never understand. Maybe someday someone will get you some help, because it's obvious you're not mentally stable.

Huh, I'd been hoping to see more of the meeting with her Genin. Oh well, it was amusing atleast. Do you have an idea when you'll post the next chapter?

i want to read more ... post at 3 chapters per day or week

Love how that one guy is going about your name and stuff. Lol, yeah because a person writes smut makes them mentally unstable because everyone is a psychologist on the Internet. My god, some of these people. Anyway, somewhat of a "meh" chapter for me. Would've preferred there to be more of the introduction between Kushina and her genin but I guess I'll have to wait.

Same as all the other garage out there, unrealistic and full of cliches. Why don't you write something original, 12 inch dick..... really is that what you wish you had jammed up your arse

Kushina being promiscuous could be hot. Kushina doing the dumb slut thing? Not hot. Not for me anyway.

first chapter not bad. like to see the chaps leading up to this chap. other then that its good.

I've personally never understood the appeal of these kinds of fanfics, regardless of the fact that they're intended to be smut/PWP/whatever. The woman in question, usually Kushina or Hinata, is almost always degraded to the point of being some sort of soulless, sub-human, sex-reliant, Naruto-/Minato-hating, parody of a cheap porn star. She feels only from her vagina and is otherwise unable to take any part in actual human emotion, the only 'man' in her life that matters seems to be the dude with the God-cock or whatever and the only thing that can distract her from that is casting any loyalty she has away - whether it's her family, her village or whatever lingering sense of humanity she has less. All for a twelve to fifteen year old with a footlong. I can admit to liking porn. I can admit to liking porn in fiction. I won't bother denying it. I'm a man and it's honestly not worth the effort trying to convince anyone of anything less. But fuck mind-break fanfiction. Easily the lowest common denominator on any fanfiction website on the 'net.

i hop its kushina and kano story or kano and kushina as main characters kushina NTR by a single boy her sons age younger than her son is a horny story kushina/ harem story is boring kushina having sex with main character is the best if not you want to make it a kushina harem story then you can make kushina Kano's bitch which she all ready is (master-kano and kushina-slave)and kushina having sex with others with kano order or kushina fucking other people because kano told her to fuck in other worlds kano would whore kushina around but i hop its kushina and kano story or kano and kushina as main characters

it was good, but NOT GOOD ENOUGH. Wish you could make it more detailed. don't rush