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for Red Hot Misadventures

by just1a1nobody

person ggit13
schedule March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? is that all she is capable of? are you for real? if you are going to do it, do it right we need are to do much much much more than this, i mean but damn, you mother got one damn hot ass to pass up on come on MORE
person JordoZ
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh now this was interesting. I think this is the best attempt I've seen yet grammar, spelling and plot-wise. I'm definitely looking forward to the build up in future chapters. Hope to see another update soon.
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good start, not many grammar or spelling mistakes. That alone makes this story stand out a bit more. Of course Kushina getting some love is the best part, not many fics about her especially compared to the M/M fics. All I can say is keep going because if all goes well I'll be posting some Kushina stories too. Hopefully within the next week or so.