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for Jiraiya\'s Bachelor Party

by 1nuggetlol

person uberchallenge
schedule April 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can't thank you enough for this fic! Both me and my boyfriend (who is a huge Jiraiya fan) LOVED reading this! Each chapter was so unique for each character. And I loved how in the final chapter, you had all the girls acting normal, rather than love struck (just fuck struck ;P ) and Tsunade's part was great too! Again, thank you so much for this!! Keep up the wonderful work. You've got a fan for life with me ;)
person Robert
schedule April 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well all good things must come to a end it was a nice story and i wonder if jiraya will write a book about his party and wedding night hehe
person Ynk
schedule April 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Finally Jiraiya get his Tsunade! He wanted that for years X3 Good job :)
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one I doubt I'll read your sasuke harem fic though he sucks oh well though good luck mang
person Guest
schedule April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Make a Naruto x Sakura harem story please
person Robert
schedule April 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I figured they be a deal but i was thinking more or the lines that she owes their boys the same thing they are doing for Jiraya LOL. Also i have some story idea's one-shot and more if you want to hear them plz feel free to email me and as always nice chapter
person Please
schedule April 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
please ignore that last post. it's obvious it's only a naruto (the character, not the series) fan and isn't really in this fic for the idea. it's great what you have so far. really hoping to see sakura in this.
person guest
schedule March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just going to say that this is not a good story using the mainstream girls for this was a bad idea cause the age difference us like 40+ years and there is now way in hell Tsunade would ever do something like this for jiraiya if anything Naruto should be the main character to make more since he is closer to the age of the girls. And Sakura should not be added. Please do not add her cause it's just disgusting and the fic make no since in general since jiraiya is dead
person robert
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if the girls chose to do this or bribed/order from tsunade (im also guessing this is when she is still hokage if she ordered them) the story and the girls are great love the scene but i wonder what time frame this is set in and what the girls think of this. For that fact i wonder if tsunade owe them something. All in all great story just a little curious about stuff keep it up :D
person humo145
schedule March 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
naruko please