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Sasuke harems are a bad idea he's a shitty character don't do it

Great stories from all three of your fics. Hope to see more. I'm really surprised you haven't gotten more reviews because I'm seeing how many views you're getting. Still, it's obvious that we all love your stuff. Know it's asking a bit but I was REALLY hoping to see a fairly long fic that had a Sasuke harem. It kinda falls in line with your Jiraiya story. The idea would be Hinata is having a bachelorette party with some of the girls (Sakura, Ino, Tenten, Temari and maybe Anko and Tsunade). The girls pitched in a got a stripper who turns out to be Sasuke. With a little bit of alcohol in their system and more than turned on for Sasuke, the girls end up having their turns with him, with the end result of Sasuke having sex with Hinata (maybe the girls helping him with her).

loved this second chapter. if it's possible, i'd love to see a chapter that has shikamaru, ino and sakura. and idea would be all three are studying in the library, with the ino sitting next to shika and sakura sitting across from them. sneakily, ino could give shika a handjob under the table, teasing him, worring him that their friend sakura might see them. she lets go and while shika is semi-relieved, he looks down and see a foot massaging his cock and looks up to see sakura giving him a footjob while pretending to study. from there they could head to the bathroom so shika can give them each some "justice".

hot, really hot, I hope you continue this one