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by Blackkitten23

schedule December 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing work I hope you keep going with this story :)

schedule August 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So happy to see a current update and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Love the spiders and the intrigue going on in her "home" village.

Nice time skip. You showed the beginning of school/friendships and now it's time for testing.

Love the spiders ;-)

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person Cevandri
schedule July 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just love the pure little girl!

I cannot wait till she grows up!

person edf07567
schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm really happy at you updated.

keep up the amazing work!

i have a question though, do Naruko's spider summons have names?

person edf07567
schedule May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love your story!

i hope you update soon but understand if you can't.

but keep up the amazing work!

schedule April 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I have to admit, I passed over this story for a while. I'm still warming up to Naruko instead of Naruto, but so far I love how you are writing this story. It's different, slow pased without feeling like it's dragging by, and i cant wait to read more! 

schedule September 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I like this a lot. I thought abut the all girl village too. What happens to boy babies?  Or those who fall in love with a man? Can't wait to see what you do with this love.

person Pyr00tje
schedule April 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh look an update! For now it seems that this story will be progressing slowly but if it's well written and if it has an original and interesting storyline I'm totally cool with it. What I didn't necessarily like in this chapter was the Asshole!Sarutobi and I hope that you won't just start with flat-out bashing. I really hope you won't! Other than that I think that this has great potential so I'll continue to follow it! Peace!
person Pyr00tje
schedule March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept and an alright start of the story. Make the chapters somewhat longer and perhaps have more stuff happening in them. This was an okay introductioni of getting her out of the village so now the actual story can start, yes? :) Curious to see more!