rate_review Reviews

Pretty hot idea! I'm liking it so far, although honestly, if the corruption was more gradual and slow, it would be hotter. But hey, faster's in demand too I suppose. 

Hoping for another chapter soon or something. 

This is exactly the kind of story I love! Forced submission, bimbofication, and raunchy rape that the girl ends up loving. Not only that, but your descriptions of the girls is great. Although not something I could ever do in real life, I love the way you objectify the women into mere objects meant for sex. It's that much greater since they have fallen from being strong and independent to where they are now. I could only love this story more if you had a "Naruko" chapter. Bonus points if Naruto is still a male and just forced into having to use his female transformation "for the sake of the mission" until he adopts the new female persona over his old male one.

chap 2 wasn't bad but it could have had a lot more done in it I think. cant wait to see who is the next girl maybe ino with a fat guy?

Great story, mate. Definitely one of the better ones out there, especially with your method of corruption going beyond 'oh big dick is my master'. I do, however, hope you ramp up the more, let's say degrading fetishes, in the next few chapters. I also hope that you don't include or reference the male characters of Naruto too much, since not that many people enjoy NTR or stuff like that.

for the first chapter it was pretty good kind of wish u did more with sakura but doesn't mean u wont come back to her later on. cant wait to see who is the lucky girl for the second mission