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.....how sinful 

update please

would like to see a naruko, kushina , and maybe a ino story like this 

yeah talk about unrealistic she is a Kunochi who most likely has been trained to resist what naruto's doing to her so she wouldn't give in so easily unless there was something else going on

cool story

I've always enjoyed bimbofication plots and Samui's a great candidate for it with her natural looks. The fact that she is such an emotionless character makes it all the more satisfying to see her will bent. Personally I prefer slightly lighter BDSM and more public humiliation, but the extent shown in your story didn't turn me off even if it wasn't quite my favorite either. My only complaint is how fast she seems to be adapting. I feel that it should take a little longer unless there is some drug or jutsu being used on her that is speeding up the process.

Not bad.Certainly not bad for you first one. Was pleasantly surprised that you replied to a review directly.Not many authors do that.Hope you took something from it. To be fair to you, the chapters weren't exactly 'short', they were short for me.It's just a matter of personal preference.While I prefer 5-6K words per chapter, others might like it shorter or longer.You really can't win here.But as long as they're not too short; well-written interesting and hot - you've got yourself a reader/fan. Hope you continue writing(something new, of course),because you do have potential. Thank you and good luck.

Well, this is a nice start! Keep up the good work!

Very good for your first chapter.Thebaetting is interesting and grammar is spot on.Only thing I didn't like was that the chapter was too short :) Hope the next one's longer. I'll strongly advice you to not break Samui too fast, it'll ruin the story.Unless you plan to make the story short(2-4) chapters.I don't know if you plan to involve other women in any way, but one of your readers(me) will appreciate any kind of involvement of Ino.I know it doesn't really fit the format, but I just wanted to let you know. Anyway, thank and good luck in your writing.

It was a good story if a bit short,I look forward to your next one, which I hope it will be soon