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April 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You know Kushina had nearly same age as Ramen guy.
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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
fail couldn't read this, text all off the page even zoomed out to 50 and it was still unreadable
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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story! Loved it! Hope to see more soon..
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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Teuchi fucking a young Kushina. I never read such story. It's disturbing but also new to read ^^
I hope you do more cuck stories, I really enjou those.
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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Real or not, cuck or not, the story's still disgusting. Netorare is one thing, people have their right to dislike what is arguably the smut-variant of character bashing (whether it's Naruto-bashing, Sasuke-bashing or otherwise) - but in case you somehow didn't notice, this Kushina/Teuchi chapter is fucking pedophilia.
Reported.
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April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm just curious, is minato actually naruto's dad or is it ichiraku? because that would be awesome
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April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i'd like to read it but the formatting on here is making it very very difficult.
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April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if it's just the site formatting being weird (it's been a little off since the overhaul), but all the lines are literally ONE line, so anyone reading has to scroll really far to the right just to finish a line.
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April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Quite good if I'd say so. If Minato and Kushina got together later than in canon, does it means we now have the identity of Ayame's mother? It would be hot.
Also, you need to check the format, it was very annoying having to read this story when lines streched from one side all the way to the other.
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April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter, it was actually really good, the only problem I had when trying to read it is that the screen just kept going on to the side, I had to move the screen all the way to to end of the sentence than all the way back to the start of the next sentence, keep up the good work.