rate_review Reviews

What the fuck is this? What's with the obsession with Kushina? You see a good female character and automatically decide to turn her into a fucking whore? Nobody would care of you turned literally any other girl into a whore but Kushina is the only well writtem female character in Naruto, why do you have to destroy her character like this? You should be ashamed of yourself.

it all doesn't really need to be in bold

Definitely loved it, though the formatting could do some work. Did you write it in Notepad or something? It needs word wrap, because all of the text runs off to the side of the page. Check that out. Anyway, while reading about Teuchi was a bit meh, I love Kushina smut, and this was really hot! Keep up the good work!

I kind of want to and dont want to know what the abortion part was.