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for A bad time for love

by 1nuggetlol

person Karin
schedule March 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Your story is great can't wait to read more!

person Robert
schedule December 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The fight scenes were'nt bad looking forward to more fights, just out of curisty if this threat is so bad what are the other nations doing or do they even know?

person Robert
schedule November 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Glad to see you are back, well looks like things are starting to get good cant wait to see if they are going to be some fight scenes in the next chapter

person robert
schedule May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Not bad the story is good and the fight with your OCs should be interesting seeing how powerful you made them.
person Robert
schedule May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter well i think the bit with the lake is a little foreshadowing but i wonder who will die garra or jensa
person robert
schedule May 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was good also you misspelled slut you said sute
person Robert
schedule April 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good start i wonder how gaara is going to get close to her without her brother knowing
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'll read any thing you write except yaoi or sasuhina those two aside keep up the good work