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for Stop teasing us Sensei!

by LordOfLust

person So_questions_yeah?
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Why was Naruto disqualified by his father during the Chuunin Exams fighting section.

person Il dodo
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well, little chapter where we see Kushina falling a little more in a slut. Which I like :-D 

But I feel that you bashed naruto. I mean : the pre - final exam rules were clear, if someone intervene to protect one of the duelist, THIS duelist is disqualified. So Kiba should have been disqualified, not naruto. Or at least, play with this fact to put naruto against his father because of unfairness  and later have a Naruto / Kushina. Then, Kushina has been really nice to Kiba considering that the last time he almost slip his tongue about his affair with Kushina in front of Naruto, she threatened to kill him in a bad way.

And she still did it with Naruto near by.... well that can be explained by being even more slutty, but still. I don't like bashing (even characters that I don't appreciate), so please refrain to do it, because other than  that the story is great. 

person JobbyWobby
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Dude, seriously! This is the best fucking Naruto fanfic I've ever read! Every day I'm checking for an update and I was very pleased with chapter 7. You deserve an award for this.

 

Excellent fanfic! I hope it never ends. (Or at least makes it to 20 chapters) 

person Anonymous
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter as always! Can't wait for the next one.

I hope you don't mind me saying this but I would prefer if you updated this story first, cause it is my absolute fav story in this site! 

 

person killerk
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lol dont you make stories like this with naruto, you do know you just generally suck at creating smut. Your work is the same thong every time, in the words of neji trash 

schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

@Communist:
Thank you for your nice words, you must be well educated. -,-
Even though I know I am just feeding a troll I kindly ask you to read all of my previous comment.
What I made were merely assumptions why the author let Minato end the match.
It is entirely in his right to write Minatos character that way, as long as he stays constant with this decision.You have no valid arguments in your comment, all you do is shouting:
"The characters should act differently because I say so !" 

We don't know how it would be done in the real show - we don't need to know.
This IS a fanfiction! It doesn't need to follow the manga, the author can do anytghing as long as it makes sense in the context of his story. If you can't handle it I would kindly suggest that you stop reading fiction and just stay with the manga. 

schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

All I did was let tell you your assumptions have no meaning behind them, I have no valid arguments, amusing… is that your counter argument, well I never expected much from you. I never said the characters should act differently, in fact I was attacking you on your statements, so stop trying twist my words into to something else. “We don't know how it would be done in the real show” are you semi illiterate, we have seen the depths of Minato’s Character to base a proper description of his personality and how he would react in most situations. I never said it has to follow the manga I was only attacking your statement, in fact you have said nothing in defense of them, has your mind comprehended the reality of the situation, I have to write to say whatever I please and if you don’t like that you can stick your head in the ground like an ostrich  

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You know a story is shit when you'd rather read the comments. Hey author person upload an other chapter so I can read reviews of people shitting on your work 

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow. That is such a cheap way to make Kiba win. -_-

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

you had naruto lose to kiba??? the flying fuck is that garbage.