LOVE YOUR STORY!!! One of the few stories I read on here. That scene in the infirmary was especially hot and naughty. Love your writing, though I do wish the udpates would be longer. I enjoy how you're talking your time with breaking down Kushina slowly making her chip away at her restrictions and what she is willing/isn't willing to do every time and becoming a slut. Were those kinky fantasies that the boys had in the forest of death foreshadowing of thinks to come? 'Cause if so, that is HOT! Keep them updates coming.
Oh ya one more thing forgot to put in my review screw the haters keep on doing what you're doing. their limp dicks can just screw off. if you don't like it the don't read it. Keep doing what you're doing and don't like these retarded anons get to you.
I'm loving this! Tho I hope it get a little dirtier... maybe dirtt talk or something like that :/
Keep it up!!
So. Naruto gets disqualified for using some of the Kyūbi's chakra? Hmm. Neji attempts to kill Hinata and injures her to the point of being hospitalized. Gaara cripples Lee and the only reason Lee doesn't die is because of the sensei's interference.
Right.
Slutty Kushina can exist, but only in one shots. This story proves it. Minato jumping in and disqualifying Naruto for usage of bijū chakra is bullshit, pure and simple. It only exists for the lime with Kiba and for further Kiba-is-an-Adonis amongst men fanfiction, which isn't that great.
Kiba? No. Shikamaru. Neji. Shino. Hell, even Lee's a better choice. Kiba's not a bad character, but like God!Mode Naruto, God!Mode Kiba can burn in hell since it's reliant on all the things most people dislike about fanon Kiba.
It usually doesn't bother me, 'cause hey, everyone has their kinks and all that shit; but even if Naruto's supposed to be 'average' (what a joke; Menma is the child of a more 'average' Minato and Kushina and winds up being something between a genius and a monster), the sudden God!Mode/God!Cock Kiba just comes off as laughable and as a way to bash Minato and Naruto.
If you'd gone for a one shot, I think this story would have been better. But prolonging into a feature length story just gives you more and more time to further fuck things up and remove it from resembling anything regarding professionalism or realistic.
I hate netorare. So much. It's essentially the Naruto Chaos Mage of smut.
Kushina should go with 2 character at once and the chapter is too short
Okay so all you kiba and sasuke fan boys woudn't mind if there was a whore mikoto or tsume story with them either tied up to a chair and having naruto and or minato sllaughter their clan then fuck them hard right oh also their dicks become small and they have as much chakra as your average citizen and lets include the mothers being cruel to the childern by the way e.g pissing on them, forcing the boys to eat second hand cum from their pussies, or how about telling the sons that they don't love them anymore and only belong to naruto-sama or minato-sama having the mothers just do about the mosst sick disgusting depraved things forcing sasuke and kiba to watch? oh but i'm sure it will be fine for you guys we'll just tell you the same things you keep telling us (it's fanfiction get over it, don't like don't read and here's my favourite one out of all them this is my story and i can do whatever i want with it) you guys won't rage right no of course not if there ever was a naruto netorare with sasuke or kiba being the viictims then there is no reason for you guys to get mad cause well as you so well put it its fanfiction get over it.
Normally I don't think it is OK to use reviews for discussions so sorry in advance LordofLust.
Come on Guys, this is just a fanfiction. You are acting as if your Family was insulted. So what if the author makes Kushina a willingly slut? What is the problem when in this fiction she is not the best kind of mother? We have on this site a lot harder stories where Mikoto or Tsume or anybody else are slutty and of course OOC. In most of these fictions Sasuke (I don't like him^^) and/or Kiba are heavily bashed. Oddly enough only this light netorare scene of Kushina is causing an uproar. I don't see any of you complaining in the other fictions.
Be as it may, I think the author makes a fantastic job in writting an original fiction and I hope he continues it. You don't have to see it my way and I agree that I was a bit offensive in my previous comment but this is still no reason to be complete jerks in the review section.
okay to darkdream look sasuke and kiba are bashed yes on normal fanfiction sites and even then naruto is bashed evenly in normal fanfiction along with them but adultfanfiction however everytime you look up the naruto section these days there is either a yaoi naruto harem story or whore kushina stories pop up like where he gets extremly stupidly bashed (sometimes for no reason at all) and gets cuckolded its rediculous if i had $50 for every gay naruto and whore kushina fic that came out these past five months i'd be filthy rich would never have to worry about a job ever again look i'm not telling lord of lust to stop writing his stories cause that would just be hypocritical of me i'm just saying he can make kiba get what he wants without heavy bashing on other characters i mean he did it for the last six chapters why break the trend?
Fuck Kiba! Fuck that asshole! I hope he fucking dies!
That was a great chapter, I can't wait for her to get even more slutty.