Well, it is true that there are a lot of Naruto yaoi and Slut Kushina stories around. I don't read yaoi and I can say that most Kushina stories are more or less like: "I'm horny and I know it is wrong but now I will fuck xyz". This will normally be done for all other woman for the next 2 to 3 chapters until the Fic is abandoned.
This fiction is different, we know what Kushina will become but the way until then is incredible interesting. One of the few fiction which take its necessary time to develope a fine anticipation for the next event. I think most will agree with me on this. :-)
Personally I find it extremly interesting to see the "bashing" in this story. Naruto isn't shown as an asshole or incompetent shinobi (Naruto had a good match). He and Kiba just dislike each other and the Inuzuka is taking a bit of advantage of the situation with Kushina. I want to see in the future more of it, well timed and paced of course. After all these chapters I am sure that LordofLust will do it just fine.^^
At last I wanted to ask what is so bad that Minato stopped the fight? He just didn't want Naruto to use his destructive power against a comrade. Or he sensed that his son was going overboard?
I think it should be OK even if it was just for the plot to get to the sex scene. In the end we are reading a smut story, we all know where the focus lies. All none sex scenes are for leading to the actual action (and till now it is really well done). I read other stories when I want deep charcter devolpment and story twists. It just so happen that this author has a better writting style than a lot "serious" writters. ;-)
Of course this is just my humble opinion.
"At last I wanted to ask what is so bad that Minato stopped the fight? He just didn't want Naruto to use his destructive power against a comrade. Or he sensed that his son was going overboard:
lol are you fucking stupid, Minato had no right to stop the match and knock Naruto unconscious, only to declare Kiba as the winner. If he was how did you put it " want Naruto to use his destructive power against a comrade", then he would have stoppd the chunin exams becaue go look up what the exams are all about then your whole agrument is invaild. On top of that how did Naruto go overboard, he used only a little, only his eyes went red and he stops and knocks out Naruto for that? Thats preposterous the Third Hokage was way softer than Minato yet he didn't knock out Naruto when he did the same thing against Neji only are a bigger scale, I find your defence of this laugable, Lord of lust is a sub-par writer just like how a lot of writers on this site, his fanfiction shows this, go check out his other works, if his fans tell him to write Naruto NTR Kiba he would do it, he has written stuff like this on Fanfiction.net. Also a jinchūriki is a weapon, even in cannon he wanted Naruto to use his power, he's the fourth hokage, he could Stop naruto if he went overboard in less than a nanosecond thus he has no reason to worry about the fight.
Great chapter with good progress made, wish you would update this story more frequently but I understand youre busy. Love Kiba's fantasy of fucking Kushina in front of Naruto, hope it happens later on. Please update soon, your story is amazing.
Your having kushina put her lust in front of her son?
I honestly have to call bullshit on Minato's interference, considering how much Neji and Gaara were allowed to beat down on their opponents in the canon preliminaries, Naruto's disqualification just seems like a stupid ass plot convienence to allow a Kiba-Kushina lemon.
Bullshit, why would Minato stop and knock out Naruto you dumbass ,Also a naruto with two parents would wreck Kiba. You justed wanted to write a lime between them, scrub
I love your story. You don't need to rush your chapters. I like when the story and the personalities of the characters are developed. As for Kushina, I think it's not necessary that she cheats on Minato with everyone. His three students are enough for her needs. I would liked though she finishes what she started with Tazuna.
Sorry if my english is awful but i wish you to keep up the good work.
Still great, even though it took a "little" while. Keep it up.